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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011.

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  1. I know it's supposed to be like that
     
    #181 FeatherHunter, Feb 23, 2011
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    #182 Empress_of_Shadows, Feb 23, 2011
  3. :) thx everyone
     
    #183 FeatherHunter, Feb 23, 2011
  4. I reposted chapter five (unfinished still :( )
     
    #184 FeatherHunter, Feb 25, 2011
  5. But more added to it :)
     
    #185 FeatherHunter, Feb 25, 2011
  6. Morpheus? :D and they all have different outfits? Umm nothing that stands out, please.
     
    #186 Empress_of_Shadows, Feb 25, 2011
  7. They don't all have different outfits…I think u may need to work on ur comprehension skills
     
    #187 FeatherHunter, Feb 25, 2011
  8. Good job
     
    #188 *bobsword (01), Feb 25, 2011
  9. Thx :)
     
    #189 FeatherHunter, Feb 25, 2011
  10. U said all now wearing a different outfit
     
    #190 Empress_of_Shadows, Feb 25, 2011
  11. Yes cause angel's outfit Was something else that's why his body shimmered
     
    #191 FeatherHunter, Feb 25, 2011
  12. hmmm...so the centurion or whatever his name is, is like the bad guy? And my character is "missing"?
    And is this happening in three different location?
    If it is....
    I LIKE IT! :D
     
    #192 Storallelite, Feb 25, 2011
  13. Yeah ur character is missing, I'm still deciding if cygnus is gonna die and the centurion are a entire nation
     
    #193 FeatherHunter, Feb 25, 2011
  14. The capital is Centega
     
    #194 FeatherHunter, Feb 25, 2011
  15. OOOHHHHH!!! Centurion is a nation??!
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    I like it even more now :cool:
     
    #195 Storallelite, Feb 25, 2011
  16. Wait nope Centega is the nation and Las Vegas is the capital
     
    #196 FeatherHunter, Feb 25, 2011
  17. las vagas?
     
    #197 Storallelite, Feb 25, 2011
  18. But the centurion are the army of centega
     
    #198 FeatherHunter, Feb 25, 2011
  19. I needed a criminal/touristic/gambling/adventure city and I'm trying to incorporate some rl cities into the story
     
    #199 FeatherHunter, Feb 25, 2011
  20. Las Vegas?
     
    #200 Starwars6374, Feb 25, 2011
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