The KaW Chronicles Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011.

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  1. Sorry feather but that part was just OK. Nothing really grabbed me.
     
    #581 Storallelite, Aug 22, 2011
  2. I love the story!!
     
    #582 couchman, Aug 23, 2011
  3. NEW PART POSTED
     
    #583 FeatherHunter, Aug 27, 2011
  4. He needs a better battle cry.
     
    #584 Eagleking, Aug 27, 2011
  5. Lol
     
    #585 FeatherHunter, Aug 28, 2011
  6. New post.
     
    #586 FeatherHunter, Sep 12, 2011
  7. Nice chapter but as far as the battle goes as a whole I'm a bit lost
    I'll have to reread later
     
    #587 Storallelite, Sep 12, 2011
  8. Thanks.
     
    #588 FeatherHunter, Sep 12, 2011
  9. What the poop is breast fabric?
     
    #589 Eagleking, Sep 12, 2011
  10. It's fabric that covers the breasts
     
    #590 *iPimella (01), Sep 12, 2011
  11. A bra?
     
    #591 Eagleking, Sep 13, 2011
  12. No.
     
    #592 FeatherHunter, Sep 13, 2011
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