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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011.

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  1. oh that makes sense...las vegas is like a gambling capital right?
     
    #201 Storallelite, Feb 25, 2011
  2. Lol what do u want me to change it
     
    #202 FeatherHunter, Feb 25, 2011
  3. Lol yes
    Las Vegas Casino!
     
    #203 FeatherHunter, Feb 25, 2011
  4. lol never knew much about las vegas, just stuff from the movies....this should be interesting :)
     
    #204 Storallelite, Feb 25, 2011
  5. Ikr :) I'm gonna add more to chapter 5 cause it's supposed to be long anyway
     
    #205 FeatherHunter, Feb 25, 2011
  6. cool, lmk when u add more!
     
    #206 Storallelite, Feb 25, 2011
  7. Ok :)
     
    #207 FeatherHunter, Feb 25, 2011
  8. So what do u think about star and grey eyes
    What do u think he is or what's gonna happen
     
    #208 FeatherHunter, Feb 25, 2011
  9. star...hmmm...he's definitely important! And grey eyes...hmmm...i'm not sure...
     
    #209 Storallelite, Feb 25, 2011
  10. I got the idea he didnt like my character
     
    #210 Empress_of_Shadows, Feb 25, 2011
  11. Oh...hmm thanks for the idea ordo
     
    #211 FeatherHunter, Feb 25, 2011
  12. After the state of the realm speech I added two more parts
     
    #212 FeatherHunter, Feb 26, 2011
  13. any feedback?
     
    #213 FeatherHunter, Feb 26, 2011
  14. FEEDBACK !!!!
     
    #214 FeatherHunter, Feb 26, 2011
  15. any feedback ???
    I added more to chapter 5 at the end of the state of the realm speech and a new part
    The Necromancess
     
    #215 FeatherHunter, Feb 26, 2011
  16. Yesh the great battle seems to short and r the last 2 bits from a book or whut?
     
    #216 Empress_of_Shadows, Feb 26, 2011
  17. Are u talking about Serpents and Centega or...
     
    #217 FeatherHunter, Feb 26, 2011
  18. And it wasn't a battle scene it's called a clash
    Minor skirmish
    Encounter of powers
    Clash of powers
    Meeting of powers
    Kinda like that
     
    #218 FeatherHunter, Feb 26, 2011
  19. Gone! Poof
     
    #219 *bobsword (01), Feb 27, 2011
  20. Yea talking about those and ka? What was i gonna say? Do we find out l8r?
     
    #220 Empress_of_Shadows, Feb 27, 2011
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