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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011.

  1. Can u tell who's belt I'm talking about?
     
  2. U cant tell for yourself!
     
  3. The water swirled Dark Blues and Greens.
    Crinus gently opened the flask,and slowly poured a tiny drop into Jerad's mouth.
     
  4. Dark Blues and Greens
     
  5. Hmmm interesting!

    and Ordo
    IM TRYING TO SEE IF THE READERS CAN!
     
  6. And y is dark blues and greens interesting?
     
  7. Reread it I posted more in the Cafe
     
  8. I'm shocked ordo :( tsk tsk
     
  9. Reread it in the cafe I mean
     
  10. Y r u shocked and the cafe? Its scarry there
     
  11. On the last page PLS ordo please please please
     
  12. After i take the dog out..
     
  13. Its the second to last page..
     
  14. Chapter 5 is up!
     
  15. nice :) but you're leaving us hanging!! :(