The KaW Chronicles Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011.

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  1. I POSTED PART TWO.
     
    #261 FeatherHunter, Mar 22, 2011
  2. A bit confused but I'll have to reread
     
    #262 Storallelite, Mar 22, 2011
  3. lol
    DoDeca means 12
    The DoDeca tribes are an entire group of people, HIDDEN.
    UNKNOWN to the rest of the world.
     
    #263 FeatherHunter, Mar 22, 2011
  4. Oh
     
    #264 Storallelite, Mar 23, 2011
  5. Battle of gold?
     
    #265 Empress_of_Shadows, Mar 23, 2011
  6. Paragraph b4 the D(whatever) tribes line.. It says 'They next see our reflection'

    Also i like 'Hope is gone, that leaves us with Despair'
     
    #266 Empress_of_Shadows, Mar 23, 2011
  7. I still hate it Ω
     
    #267 *IRONhulk (01), Mar 23, 2011
  8. And I added something to it
     
    #268 *IRONhulk (01), Mar 23, 2011
  9. Hulk, stop posting on it.
     
    #269 Smighter89, Mar 24, 2011
  10. Also, sometimes your commas don't have a space between the things... Like, 'He couldn't,he can't.' or something like that.
     
    #270 Smighter89, Mar 24, 2011
  11. Iron your banned from this thread now LEAVE.
     
    #271 FeatherHunter, Mar 24, 2011
  12. Thx for the feedback :)
     
    #272 FeatherHunter, Mar 24, 2011
  13. Forgot to add comment lol, it's really, really good so far. Keep it up!
     
    #273 Smighter89, Mar 24, 2011
  14. Thx :)
     
    #274 FeatherHunter, Mar 24, 2011
  15. Your gonna be my one of my plot twisters!
    Showing up at the most unexpected of moments...
     
    #275 FeatherHunter, Mar 24, 2011
  16. 0.0 O rlly?
     
    #276 Smighter89, Mar 24, 2011
  17. Yeah
    and I edited the incorrect parts, ordo.
     
    #277 FeatherHunter, Mar 24, 2011
  18. I emailed the devs bout ironhulk and gave them links to all his spam and pointed out where he broke ToU by posting on my story
     
    #278 FeatherHunter, Mar 24, 2011
  19. I'm about to report spartan too when I get on comp.
     
    #279 FeatherHunter, Mar 24, 2011
  20. I wasn't telling you, I was telling fanfiction.
    Ironhulk is our MORTAL enemy
     
    #280 FeatherHunter, Mar 24, 2011
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