The KaW Chronicles Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011.

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  1. new part is up :)
     
    #241 FeatherHunter, Mar 2, 2011
  2. In the begining of the second paragraph it makes no sence and i dont like how u actually put 'btw' in there.. But the 'they want it for its gold and silver' was good:p
     
    #242 Empress_of_Shadows, Mar 3, 2011
  3. Hmmm interesting feedback and I'll look into that ordo
     
    #243 FeatherHunter, Mar 3, 2011
  4. Yeah try not to use abbreviations in stories unless they stand for something important like S.I.T.T.E.R.S.A was fine but btw and lol are generally frowned upon.
     
    #244 *iPimella (01), Mar 3, 2011
  5. not bad
     
    #245 Storallelite, Mar 3, 2011
  6. I'm interested to find out what ordo us talkin bout

    Quote it for me pls :)
     
    #246 FeatherHunter, Mar 3, 2011
  7. I might put FH in Salvation next part.
     
    #247 cheesemuffin, Mar 3, 2011
  8. YES!!
     
    #248 FeatherHunter, Mar 3, 2011
  9. I edited a lot of it ordo and gloomi so reread it pls.
    I know i'm always editing stuff and i'm sorry but it's just that all of a sudden i'll see flaws in my writing and so i'll edit it.
     
    #249 FeatherHunter, Mar 4, 2011
  10. Thx Feather and what was i riding on me ?
     
    #250 *Poisonfang (02), Mar 5, 2011
  11. @ German_Idiot i am part German so dont mess with me Im very good at fighting since i play video games
     
    #251 *Poisonfang (02), Mar 5, 2011
  12. Whats a good writing thing for itouch/iphone/ipad or any idevice with Kaw on it
     
    #252 *Poisonfang (02), Mar 5, 2011
  13. Your writing on spammer... A terrible 3 headed dragon...
     
    #253 FeatherHunter, Mar 5, 2011
  14. *riding
    Lol
     
    #254 FeatherHunter, Mar 5, 2011
  15. NEW PART UP :)
     
    #255 FeatherHunter, Mar 6, 2011
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    #256 Storallelite, Mar 6, 2011
  17. Thx
     
    #257 FeatherHunter, Mar 7, 2011
  18.  AHA! 2 THUMBS UP! HAHA! I OUT-praisefeather'd YOU!! AHA STORA!(bored)
     
    #258 Empress_of_Shadows, Mar 7, 2011
  19. Me too (bored)
     
    #259 FeatherHunter, Mar 7, 2011
  20. I've got some awesome writing going on but i'm not ready to post...
     
    #260 FeatherHunter, Mar 19, 2011
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