Operation:interception feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by german_idiot, Aug 29, 2010.

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  1. Oh and sorry for spelling errors iPod keyboards small
     
    #61 german_idiot, Sep 3, 2010
  2. Best war novel I've ever read. For real. Very exiting. But.....
     
    #62 MagicV, Sep 4, 2010
  3. Poseidons real name is christopher
     
    #63 psycho_killer, Sep 4, 2010
  4. I know psych only spillman knows that why the others just call hi. Poseidon
     
    #64 german_idiot, Sep 4, 2010
  5. Stopped reading after all those grammatical errors and seeing the word SEAL's.
     
    #65 *Gen_Spartan (01), Sep 4, 2010
  6. Gen I don't need that kind of sarcasm here so what I did some fricken typos and what u got against SEALs
     
    #66 german_idiot, Sep 4, 2010
  7. SEALs are cliché and typos are annoying, distracting, and sometimes confusing.

    I had to read your post twice to figure out what the hell
     
    #67 *Gen_Spartan (01), Sep 4, 2010
  8. I agree with German!!
     
    #68 *lady-marian (01), Sep 4, 2010
  9. you were saying to me.

    Good writers use good grammar...
     
    #69 *Gen_Spartan (01), Sep 4, 2010
  10. U can do better? And what u did just then was grammatically incorrect besides SEALs are one of the best military groups we hav in the country
     
    #70 german_idiot, Sep 4, 2010
  11. It wasn't grammatically incorrect. It was me trying to cancel autocorrect when it was above the submit button.

    Also SEALs aren't as good as you think. Again they're cliche and overdone.
     
    #71 *Gen_Spartan (01), Sep 4, 2010
  12. And besides this is the first story I've ever written PERIOD
     
    #72 german_idiot, Sep 4, 2010
  13. U know this how?hav u been side by side with a seal?hav u gone into a combat session with a seal?do u know anything about seals?
     
    #73 german_idiot, Sep 4, 2010
  14. Have you?
     
    #74 *Gen_Spartan (01), Sep 4, 2010
  15. What about Rangers, Delta, SAS, CIA and FBI SpecOps?
     
    #75 *Gen_Spartan (01), Sep 4, 2010
  16. No but I've actually done research on them unlike you apparently....
     
    #76 german_idiot, Sep 4, 2010
  17. Clearly you hypocrite.
     
    #77 *Gen_Spartan (01), Sep 4, 2010
  18. U know what just get off here ur just trying to pick a fight cause u can't download ur free porn u dick
     
    #78 german_idiot, Sep 4, 2010
  19. "Ten things of C4"
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    Mr. Research guy
     
    #79 *Gen_Spartan (01), Sep 4, 2010
  20. You're the one that can't take criticism. I wasn't even being mean and you got all upset.
     
    #80 *Gen_Spartan (01), Sep 4, 2010
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