Operation:interception feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by german_idiot, Aug 29, 2010.

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  1. Hmm sounds good who's the author
     
    #21 german_idiot, Aug 31, 2010
  2. Jonathan Safran Foer. :)

    North Korea... My family's from the South. Lol.
     
    #22 Luxanne, Aug 31, 2010
  3. So wait is this a war novel or a family trying to get to the south novel
     
    #23 german_idiot, Aug 31, 2010
  4. Hmm? No, I didn't mean that the novel was anything to do with Noeth/South Korea, sorry >_< I just meant the format of paragraphs. For example, when people talk, their quotations are jammed next to each other on one paragraph (like yours); I was using it as an example xD
     
    #24 *Wyvern (02), Aug 31, 2010
  5. Hey the stories not lookin too bad bud ur doing keep up the good work I can't wait for more.
    BUMP
     
    #25 valt026, Aug 31, 2010
  6. When's the next chapter
     
    #26 *ggjghhgb (01), Sep 1, 2010
  7. Chapters 5&6 are up
     
    #27 german_idiot, Sep 1, 2010
  8. When's the next chapter gonna be out
     
    #28 *ggjghhgb (01), Sep 1, 2010
  9. 5&6 r up mayb 2morrow will b 7&8
     
    #29 german_idiot, Sep 1, 2010
  10. Good job! I'm too lazy to make a bio, but can you make a character with my name on her? Preferably evil 
     
    #30 *iPimella (01), Sep 1, 2010
  11. Well I guess I squeeze u in gloom just post ur person here but after that I'm not accepting any more applications
     
    #31 german_idiot, Sep 1, 2010
  12. Sounds good so far. Looks like a good plot. Keep it up.
     
    #32 *Irin (01), Sep 1, 2010
  13. Bump
     
    #33 german_idiot, Sep 1, 2010
  14. Chapters six and seven are up
     
    #34 german_idiot, Sep 1, 2010
  15. That was really good. U know a lot of military terms
     
    #35 *Tonks (01), Sep 1, 2010
  16. Dads been on two tours to Iraq and Afghanistan and to help teach cops in Turkey and Kuwait he tells me alot of stuff about military stuff
     
    #36 german_idiot, Sep 1, 2010
  17. When's the next chapter
     
    #37 *ggjghhgb (01), Sep 2, 2010
  18. GG UR TOO IMPATIENT I DO HAV SCHOOL AND CRAP I HAV TO DEAL WITH HOPEFULLY FRIDAY THOUGH
     
    #38 german_idiot, Sep 2, 2010
  19. Ok the books awsome thought
     
    #39 *ggjghhgb (01), Sep 2, 2010
  20. Can't wait for my char to pew ppl out o the sky
     
    #40 *Bjorn21 (01), Sep 2, 2010
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