Sorry for having an opinion jay. And to prove I don't hate you or anything read a Tom Clancy book and get tips from him. Unlike most of the wars stories on here, Russia isn't always the bad guy, and SEALs aren't always heroes. Also, I'm immature how?
U were pretty much mocking me and calling me a baby that's pretty immature and u know what it's MY novel I'm writing so I'll write how I want to
The way u wrote ur first post made it sound like my story wasn't good and that seals aren't good besides wouldn't u want some positive feedback on something
Dude ur not proving anything by trying to defend urself ok and again I say it's my story if I want a Russian who drinks vodka in it I put it in if i wanted to put in a fricken purple elephant I would because I'm the author
You're not proving anything by being immature. And if I want to criticize you for putting a Russian stereotype in your story I'll do it! As a writer you have to learn to accept that there will be people who don't like your story. You can't go around calling them douchés cuz it'll make you look like one.
Was I trying to prove anything besides people like POSITIVE feedback u pretty much said u stopped reading when u saw SEALs and a few grammactical errors
You were trying to disprove me and make me look like an idiot. Look at Stephanie Meyer. She probably gets a lot of negative feedback from people. How many times has she cussed them out?