Operation:interception feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by german_idiot, Aug 29, 2010.

  1. If u don't like the book then don't fricken read it andI don't need UR kind of criticism on this u could hav just easily said something constrictive
     
  2. My kind of criticism? I wasn't being hostile... If you want to be an author you have to learn to deal with criticism.

    I didn't read it. I TRIED to again but I stopped at "The North took the South". What time period is this set in?
     
  3. U know what I'm tired and I don't wanna deal w/ this and ur not paying attention if everyone else who read it understands
     
  4. American weaponry wouldn't make an invasion of S.K. which uses American weaponry last two hours, especially since we have bases there.

    I just love how you incorporated a Russian as a terrorist who smells like vodka. Original as ****.
     
  5. Ever heard of surprise? **** desert storm only lasted what a few days? And what'd I tell u bout posting here
     
  6. Saying that a third-world country with sanctions of weapons by the U.N would "surprise" the U.S is just ridiculous.
     
  7. Hey ass it's 2015 who know what the hell will happen til then
     
  8.  In five years... Not much is gonna change.

    You need to calm down. Usually I would've ripped you a new one but I haven't even so much as swore at you.
     
  9. No ur just being jerk about this saying I'm using incorrect grammer and other stuff that doesn't fricken need to b looked into tell u what if I write a sequel I'll go to u how bout that
     
  10. THAT'S FEEDBACK!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wtf seriously, kid?! You're getting mad cuz I gave you feedback!

    FFFFFFEEEEEEDDDDDBBBBAAACCCKKKKK!!
     
  11. But the way ur putting it makes u sound like a douchebag
     
  12. No the way you write makes you sound like one.
     
  13. The way I write?u know what don't post again cause I'm not gonna respond to it so goodbye
     
  14. Baby.  Wah! I don't accept comments unless they're patting me on the back! Wah!
     
  15. poor imature child
     
  16. Agreed German, agreed.
     
  17. Gen GTFO it's a good story
     
  18. It's pretty good so far. But can I suggest to do quotations on every line. Example:
    "Hi Timmy how was school today?"
    "It was fantastic mom! I got a B+ on a quiz!"
    It gets a little confusing every once in a while but I still give it a .
     
  19. Oh ok I thought a spacing between quotes would b good but I could try it like that thanx
     
  20. No problem. Wow I never knew I'd remember that from English class. Lol