If u don't like the book then don't fricken read it andI don't need UR kind of criticism on this u could hav just easily said something constrictive
My kind of criticism? I wasn't being hostile... If you want to be an author you have to learn to deal with criticism. I didn't read it. I TRIED to again but I stopped at "The North took the South". What time period is this set in?
U know what I'm tired and I don't wanna deal w/ this and ur not paying attention if everyone else who read it understands
American weaponry wouldn't make an invasion of S.K. which uses American weaponry last two hours, especially since we have bases there. I just love how you incorporated a Russian as a terrorist who smells like vodka. Original as ****.
Ever heard of surprise? **** desert storm only lasted what a few days? And what'd I tell u bout posting here
Saying that a third-world country with sanctions of weapons by the U.N would "surprise" the U.S is just ridiculous.
In five years... Not much is gonna change. You need to calm down. Usually I would've ripped you a new one but I haven't even so much as swore at you.
No ur just being jerk about this saying I'm using incorrect grammer and other stuff that doesn't fricken need to b looked into tell u what if I write a sequel I'll go to u how bout that
THAT'S FEEDBACK!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wtf seriously, kid?! You're getting mad cuz I gave you feedback! FFFFFFEEEEEEDDDDDBBBBAAACCCKKKKK!!
It's pretty good so far. But can I suggest to do quotations on every line. Example: "Hi Timmy how was school today?" "It was fantastic mom! I got a B+ on a quiz!" It gets a little confusing every once in a while but I still give it a .