AWESOME STORY!!!!! When i first read the first chapter, i thiught it was real and im like OH MY G SERIOUS?!?! And then im like, oh. its a story, THE BEST ONE EVER!! And also, to all of you Haters out there, you cant type any better than arimay can on a non-scrolling iPod. If your here to review, keep your comments to yourself and go away. Good luck Ari
Oh my god! Kiki that was sooo nice! it made me feel great inside! U guys r really the best and I cannot stress that enough! I absoluly LOVE you guys! You mean soooo much to me!!!
Keep going! Also the more u type and if u slow down a little to include punctuation, the better ur story will look. Auto capital and auto correction might help too. I'm just giving u tips cuz I do those things too
I walked down stairs to see mom. "Uh, hi mom." I said to her with my hands behind my back and his hands in mine. She turned around to look at me . "Oh, hi sweetie. Are you feeling okay?" she didn't even look behind me to see Declan. I turned to him and he laughed then quickly shut his mouth. I watched him as he walked over to my mother and started to dance around. I giggled. "What are you laughing about? Do I have somthing on my face?" she asked squinting her eyes at me. I quickly turned to her and untied my hands and dropped them to my sweat pants. "Oh nothing. I was just thinking of somthing Lucas said over the phone. "Oh." she said turning back around making dinner. Declan looked at me signaling me that he didn't know who Lucas was. I signaled him back telling him to come to the stair case. He followed me and we both sat on the steps. "Whos Lucas?" he whispered squinting at me as my mother did before. "My new boyfriend." I said kind of embarressed. "Oh okay." he sat there and played with his hands. "Im sorry. It's just he came to me and he made me feel better about your death." I whispered back feeling disapionted. "Thats okay. People move on I get it." he said looking at me smiling. "I didn't move on." I whispered than he smiled and I smiled. Mom soon came around the corner. We both looked at her except Declan faisial expresion didn't matter she couldn't see him. "Alex, who in the world are you whispering too?" she asked holding a towel and wiping her hands. I looked at Declan and he nodded. "Declan." I said gulping.