Sorry guys! I can't write today! I'm going to new York! But when I get home I will try to remember to write.
THIS IS THE BEST BOOK EVER!! arimay, well done!! This is soooo entertaining!! I LOVE IT!! I would pay for this LOL!! And don't worry about the spelling so much cos I know it's hard when the Ipod doesn't scroll. Congratz it's BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!! xoxoxoxo
THIS IS THE BEST BOOK EVER!! arimay, well done!! This is soooo entertaining!! I LOVE IT!! I would pay for this LOL!! And don't worry about the spelling so much cos I know it's hard when the Ipod doesn't scroll. Congratz it's BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!! xoxoxoxo
She started to laugh. "Ah, sweetie. Declan isn't there. You must be seeing things." she said smiling looking to my side. I looked to my side. I could see him, I guess she couldn't. "Mom, he is there. He is, if you can see him." I enfesized the word, is. "Well, I don't see him!" she yelled at me holding up her hand with the towel in it clenched in her fist. "I'm right here." Declan said aloud. Mother gasped. She started to shake and look at me with eyes that were like solid gold. Than slowly melted and started to tear down her face. "Who was that?" she asked in fear. Dropping the towel on the ground. I watched it as it slowly flowed in the air and down to the ground it made no noise what so ever. "Who do you think?" I said than I could tell that she saw Declan. She started to back up and into the small table behinded her. I saw her back up into the flowers and I saw the vase fall on it's side as the water slowly toppled out. She fell to the ground and it soon happened so slowly. The vase slowly rolled of the table and pieced up into small pieces, break on my mothers head. She soon fell to the ground on her side and closed her eyes. Her head bleeding. I ran to the kitchen and grabbed the phone. My hands shaking rapidly I dialed the number 911. I stared at my mother and talked to the person on other line than I saw my mother and Declan. "Shes not breatheing!" Declan screamed. The phone slipped from my hands and landed on the floor I charged to her and Declan. Declan ran to the phone and talked to the woman on the other land. I dropped to the floor crying. With questions buzzing rapidly in my mind. What else was I supposed to do but think? I didn't know. My hand started to hurt and I started to scream.
My eyes reared as I looked at Declan's shattered eyes at the sight of my mothers pain. Soon then the ambulance came in and started to take the two electrical devices that looked like ironing plates and held it to my mothers chest. And said clear. I watched a my mother jumped by the electrical shock. The sight of it started to make me bawl. I tucked my head into Declan's chest. He wrapped his arms around me and tried to calm me down. I couldn't believe what was happening to her. They said that they had to have profecianals work on her so they rushed her to the hospital. We both hoped into my pick up truck and Declan started to drive with his other hand wrapped in mine. "Shes going to survive this know matter what. I know she's going through hell. But, know matter what she's going to make it." I wiped the tears from my eyes and asked how. "God. He gives me messages. Did you know, he's the one who created this loop hole. That how I escaped. He's the one who made this loop hole so the people who deeply love the people on earth, can come back." I looked at him with my puffy eyes. I didn't say I word. I was amazed. I was happy about the news though. Soon we arrived at the hospital. For hours and hours we waited for the news. The doctor spoke so slowly. I couldn't understand the words that he was saying. Then they prossessed in my head. My reaction? I was absoluly, I'll write more tomorrow! Haha I love to leave u guys in suspence!
Hurry up n write the whole book and get it published so i can read it all really fast instead of in tiny bits!! Jk! Ari you really are a great writer! Very creative!