A Foot Print In the Sand

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *arimay (01), Aug 22, 2010.

  1. It's awesome!!!! Great job ari! 
     
  2. Write plz plz plz
     
  3. I'm up! And I'm ready to write ALOT.
     
  4. And dark don't do that it's mean.
     
  5. I starred at the doctor as the words slowly prossessed in my mind. I couldn't believe that Declan was right. I looked at Declan with releve.
    "We stiched her head up and all the glass is out. She's awake but we gave her some medician to put her to sleep for a while. You can talk to her while she's awake." I smiled with joy and wiped the tears from my eyes. The doctor lead us to her room.
    "Hi sweetie, and Declan." she said looking at us.
    "Hi mom." I said than the doctor left the room.
    "So, Declans back." she said as soon as the doctor left. Declan nodded and smiled.
    "Are you mad?" I asked in fear of her answer.
    "Of course not. I'm just a spasm Declan. And when you left I cried too. You take care of her so good. Unlike that Lucas. All he wants to do is kiss." I could tell that Declan was happy that my mother didn't like Lucas and didn't trust him. He smiled at my mother and I, I started to laugh. I didn't like Lucas that much for a while now too. He would bore me. Other than Declan, he made my heart burst into excitment. I was in love. What else could I say?
     
  6. Please comment! And read my new book coming out, it's called,
    The Tiger Girl
     
  7. Is that the end?
     
  8. Yaaaay!!cause I want more!
     
  9. We later left the hospital just Declan and I, we chatted in the car for a while. Then I noticed he took a wrong turn and was headed somwhere else.
    "Where are we going?" I asked looking out the window.
    "Beach. I though we should do somthing together." we soon arrived there and there was nobody there. We sat in the sand with his arms wrapped around my body.
    "The last time we were here you gave me my first kiss." I smiled up at his eyes. They were the most beautiful thing a person could lay their eyes on.
    "Yes, your right." he said getting up and helping me up too.
    "And now, we going to make another memory." he reached into his pocket and took out a black box and kneeled on one knee.
    "Alexandra Faith, will you marry me?" I was speechless at his words. I starred into his beautiful eyes and started to cry. I was so happy I couldn't breathe. My words came out so softly that they turned into a whisper.
    "Yes." I smiled at him as he got up and slipped a gorgous ring on my finger.
    "I love you, and I will never hurt you ever. I love you so much that I would die for you and you would never regret this." he said kissing me. I smiled and we walked along the beach making once more, foot prints in the sand.
    The End
     
  10. A foot print in the sand 2 is coming soon!
     
  11. Grrr I can't wait till the sequal!!!!!!
     
  12. Wait let me get this staraight



    Alex is in HIGH SCHOOL an is getting married to Declanwho is DEAD


    Wierd.......
     
  13. Aw...that's so sweet…
     
  14. I know! I started screaming when I wrote it!