A Foot Print In the Sand

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *arimay (01), Aug 22, 2010.

  1. Lol I'll be posting more later
     
  2. thumbs up!! well done arimay!!
     
  3. "Alex? Can you hear me sweetie?" I heard my mothers voice followed by a soft weeping.
    "She can't hear me. I can't believe she can't hear me. Sweetie please wake up! Wake up! Wake up!" I snapped my head up and looked at her.
    "Oh my gosh your okay! Your okay!" she hugged my tightly then let go to wipe her tears.
    "Listen! I don't care if it's Declan inside you we have to get him out!" she yelled. The school nurse came up to us.
    "Some boy is inside you? Dang. He must have some crush on you or somthing if he has the guts to go inside you. I looked around the room amd saw an ocean themed room. I looked out a smaller room to see a desk and a computer. I looked beside that to see a cloosed door that had a sign that said bathroom on it. Next to the computer was a refrigerator that the nurse was opening. I saw her take an icepack from the frige and a clothe that was beside the frige. I looked to my mother looking at my from my side.
    "What happened?" I asked taking the icepack from the nurse and putting it on my head.
    "Mr. Fletcher said that you were moaning and than just fell to the ground. Declan is going to hurt you sweetie he has to come out some how." she said looking worried sick. I held her hand and asked if we could go home. She told me yes and I took the icepack off my head and handed it to the nurse. She held my hand and asked how I was feeling. We soon got into the car and I told her the answers that's she asked. We soon got home and I went upstairs to change, my mother told me to come right back down. I could tell she was scared to death. I came down in some comfy sweat pants and a blue t-shirt. I sat on the couch and my mom covered me up with a blanket ad gave me all my needs. My iPod, cell phone and laptop. I said thank you and she told me it's no trouble what so ever. I turned on the television and watched Degrassi. Which was a drama show. By now these two boys were playing wrestleing and all of a sudden one of them kisses one. I was interested in that crap, it was so dramatic that it really pulled me into it. I watched that and an episode of a show call what I like about you. Which was another drama show except it had some comedy to it too. I soon found my self in pain again. So much pain that I was absoluly ready to scream I couldn't bare it and that's what set him out.
     
  4. Omg will she be ok D:
     
  5. Does alex play kaw?
     
  6. Lol no well maybe lol
     
  7. I'll be posting more very soon now!
     
  8. this is soo good! I like how she's way hong degressi love that show :)
     
  9. I tumble off the couch and onto the floor. All of my body starts to tighten up my legs tighten so hard that I literally think that they about to burst open, I feel my self get hotter and hotter and my heart starts to twist into knots that may never be untied, I can't bare this it's hurts so much that all I can hear is the pounding of my heart. I watch as my mother runs to me in fear.
    "Alex! Alex!" she screams and starts to cry. I breath heavily and I shake uncontrollably enough that my body starts to get even tighter by now my heart is burning and veins feel as if the are on fire. I can't shake this feeling away like I could before it's impossible. My fingers start to curl and I'm ready to shriek but nothing comes out.
    "Talk to me! Oh my gosh! Baby please! Dot do this to me! God please help her! Help her help her!" God is not answering to her prayers because it starts to hurt even more I finally let out a loud groan and shriek. Than I say the words that will change everything that was ever made of me.
    "Declan! Get out of me right now!" Then it all freezes. The pain fades away, I can feel as the arms of an angel slowly wrap around me.
    "You finally did it, I'm here." I hear the voice of Declan say I smile as he holds me gently.
     
  10. Thx guys please comment and see what u think now! 
     
  11. Awe is it over if it is then I can't wait for book 2
     
  12. Is it gonna be continued, arimay? It's so great!! Haha 
     
  13. Is it gonna be continued, arimay? It's so great!! Haha 
     
  14. Yeah yeah huh huh is it?!! :)
     
  15. woah! that's so good u should for sure countinune with this it's super good :D
     
  16. Great story but you definatly need to check spelling and punctuation, iPod or no iPod 
     
  17. Of course it's not done!
     
  18. I'm now writting another chapter!
     
  19. Here comes the next chapter!