Kiki i ment hav kids. But I wouldn't post it all detailed I wouldn't even write a chapter on going through that prossess. I wouldn't want my fans to feel that uncomfortable.
We soon ended up laying in the feild behind his house. His arms twisted around my neck, his hands twisted in my hair. I layed beside him and the beautiful blue small flowers and fresh green grass. I looked up at the sky starring at the puffy yet rough clouds splattered across the sky. "Is it time to start planning our marrige?" I asked curiously starring back at the tiny blue flowers in between us. "We can start planning anytime you would like." he said smiling starring and playing with my hair. I was excited for this. "I'd to start very soon. Like, when I get back home soon." I said putting a huge smile on my face. "I have no problem with that." he said laughing then he leaned in and he kissed me.
Picking my perfect dress A couple weeks passed since that day, today was the day I was picking my wedding dress. Our wedding between Declan and I would be very soon. Maybe in a week. I had so much on my plate to work through that I forgot to pick a dress. I booked a church Declan picked his wonderful tux we both picked out a cake to be made. A small one of course only my mother and father was coming. Dad had to be part of the wedding, he was my father. The only problem was he didn't know Declan was alive and him and mother faught a lot. I hoped they could keep it cool for once. Declan insisted that he didn't want his parents here, it would break there hearts if they saw him go back up to that glorious place after I ever did. Me and my mother walked to a dress place with boat loads of money. Declan waited outside because he wanted to this to be a surpirse. I told him he could come and help me pick but he insisted that he would stay out and make it be a surprise for him on our wedding day. Only me and my mother walked in and saw a gay person in a tux playing with a dress. You could tell that he was gay in the way he talked. He lifted up his hands in a hug and looked at us. "Well hello, hello!" he said hugging my mother and I gently. "So you must be my gorgous bride! Hello darling! Okay here's how it works, I will show you rakes and rakes of dresses, you can try on anyones you would like. We won't stop until you find the perfect one okay darling!" he said I smiled at him uncomfortabley. He led me into a room full of dresses. I saw tons of beautiful dresses but no ones quite for me. I looked at a dress with a flece stripe in the middle of it. I tryed on this one and looked at myself in the mirror. I walked out of the room to where my mother was sitting. "That looks fabulous!" he said claping. I didn't like it as much as I didn't looking at it. I shook my head no and tryed on a couple more dresses. I soon came to one so perfect. It was a beautiful long puffed out dress with a silver stripe in the middle. I walked out in it and felt great in it. This was the dress for me, we soon picked out a crown and some high heel shoes. I tryed it all on. My brunette hair was curled and wavy and tied up in a bun with my crown. I looked great, he also gave me some white roses so I looked all put together. I knew this was my wedding look, the only thing left was where would we go on a honey moon?
Arimay, you're still repeating your words a lot, not a good thing. Also, you have some grammatical errors but nothing an editor can't fix, and being a bit more descriptive and literary would bump this book up a lot. Anyhow, nice job, especially the story line
Well, I don't really know kimber.I guess it pretty good so I've heard or maybe I'm just lucky. I've written another story but it's scary it's called inside the mirror but it dosnt hav any fans. I guess I'm just lucky. Oh I take that back I hav one fan on there but that's it.
My Wedding Day Today was my wedding day. I stood in one of the rooms in the small chapple. I looked at myself all dressed up in the mirror. My mother behind me in a dress as well and my father waiting outside the door to see my wonderful dress. I stood there starring at myself, I was excited yet nervous at the same time. I walked out the small room to see my father smiling. "You look gorgeous." he said starring at the dress than making eye contact at me. My mother gave me a kiss and then went to sit down. The music played and two ladies opened the doors for us the walk out, I've pictured my wedding before except not like this. Not getting married to Declan who is dead. I pictured it with much more people. A handsom man starring at me smiling examining at how beautiful I was. Not that Declan wasn't smiling at how beautiful I was and of course he was the most handsomest man on earth to me, for some reason I just didn't picture it like this. I walked slowly down the isle watching Declan blush at how pretty I looked. I smiled at his reaction. I looked to my father and smiled he smiled back, we soon came o my mother in the first row when Declan took me now. She was standing with my father crying. I giggled and then Declan and I got up to the little stage area of the church. The prist said like a ton of words but than soon he was done and Declan and I promised eachother to stay with eachother forever. We soon both said I do and the ceremony almost over only one thing left I thought in the back of my mind, "I now pronounce you husband and wife, you may now kiss the bride." I looked at Declan than he leaned in to kiss me. I mouthed the words I love you than we both walked down the isle as mother and father clapped.