A Foot Print In the Sand

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *arimay (01), Aug 22, 2010.

  1. (not the end yet!!!!!)
     
  2. OMG I luv this story!!!!!
     
  3. 
     
  4. Just read all of it u rock epic story!!!
     
  5. I  u guys soooooooooooooooooooo much i cannot stress tht enough! Ur all amazing in every single possible way! I send all my love to fans who help me get through the haters and mean people. U guys r the best I cannot ever lie about that. Thank u soooooooooo much all! I love ya! 
     
  6. And so, Declan and I had gone on a honey moon to the Bahamas and had an amazing time. About a year later we had beautifl children. A little girl Jesse, A little boy named Hunter and another boy named Damiane. They were beautiful children and since Declan was a ghost we found out that each of our children had powers of talking to God. We raised them in our house as any other parent would except our house was hidden in the woods. Later in life I had died of old age and eventually went to heven. Declan told the kids he was going to and gave each of the adults kisses and told God it was time, or so I heard from him. We looked like our selves again like back in high school me and Declan because we were ment to stay that way. Soon the kids came to heven with us to leaving only one thing behind, stories of our past and the house in the woods somewhere that you would never find it. So that's where the story ends from Declan me and the kids. And so, we all lived happily ever after.

    ~A beautiful happy, The End~

    By-Arimay

    Thank you to all my fans of the book I love you all.
     
  7. I luv happy endings it was a great story but im sad it ended
     
  8. *Cough*chick story*cough*
     
  9. Hmmm... A cliché ending... Big surprise 
     
  10. No pun intended 
     
  11. I read till the Third page I wax wondering if theirs any sex in the book and if theirs any action
     
  12. You should make a se
     
  13. Nope, no action or sex, mostly mushy stuff 
     
  14. sorry that posted by itself i was meant to say you should make a sequil about the kids 'cause i really want to read more and you should get this book published some how! I'm really sad it ended
     
  15. This book cannot be published, at the end of the line it would be so changed...
    Plus this world does not need a poorly written version of twilight 
     
  16. Umm... not a very good second book, graduation, wedding, over. Not very good.
     
  17. Whoops I meant write another story!