Too long couldn't really get into it and I really don't think u shouldve put it in over 200 pages I don't think most people will stay up all nite to read this
OMG great story!!! I read it in 1 morning!!!WISH I COULD READ MORE!!! Ahhhh WOOHOO GREAT ARI!!
One suggestion I Would make, if you can do it, I would recomend trying to make a new thread with all the chapters. It would greatly reduce interuptions, and maybe people would like it better.
i might have a way 2 get this published. make a website and put all ur stories on it and give it a name that might pop up when ppl are looking 4 something else. then advertise it on world chat, get people that have read it 2 recomend it. ive already recomended it and sent the link 2 my 6 best friends.
AND SO U SEE MY FRIEND THIS IS A RATE AND IDK WAT THE BOOK IS ABOUT BUT. STAN WAS DRIVEN INSANE BY HIS OBSESION AND BEING EGNORED BY HIS IDOLE SO HE DROVE OVER. A BRIDGE DONT WRITE TO FAMOUS PEOPLE CUZ WEN THEY DONT ANSWER U DRIVE YOUR SELF INSANE LOL JK JK LOL ) BUT ANY WAY WHOS TO SAY WAT NOT TO SAY IM NOT EVEN MAKING ANY SENCE