A Foot Print In the Sand

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *arimay (01), Aug 22, 2010.

  1. More!more! I hungry!!
     
  2. Omg I cnt wait!!! Will there b another 1? Or is it just going 2 be 1 long 1?
     
  3. If she makes a third one, maybe it could be called Devotion?
     
  4. i like that title lady marian.
     
  5. Lol guys sry I didn't post yesterday I was making cupcakes for my baby bro birthdy today! I might have the time to post today but I'm not sure, if I do get the chance I deffenetly will! I love u fans! 
     
  6. Oh ans im writing another book its kinda a creepy story! It's calling Inside the Mirror. It about a girl who gets a mirror for her birthday than wishes herself dead to it because she very mad at somone. She gets wharped into the mirror and the mirror is exactly what she wished for all things making her and causing her to die. How will she get out? Will she ever get out?
     
  7. Yes she will
     
  8. Could you Tell me how everyone was normal at the Speech when She sad she's gonna marry declan?everybody knowed hes Dead!
     
  9. Maybe they think she's gettin married to a different Declan I'll be writing more soon.
     
  10. Yay more writing!!
     
  11. Crap I'll write more when I get back from school gtg!
     
  12. Ari, just carry on writing. No comments from us necessary. Really. Lol
     
  13. After school Declan, mom and I all went home. Declan and I went upstairs and into my room to spend some time together, even though we would each spend time together for tge rest of our lives. Well, the rest of mine. I soon started to ask if he would stay here on earth when I passed away or he would somehow come with me.
    "When you eventually go, I will turn myself into God and tell him that I love you, and I can't be without you and that I love you deeply." he said lifting me to his lap while we each sat on my bed. I layed my head down to his shoulder and he kissed my head and brushed ny hair with his smooth finger tips. Declan had a house a few miles away. I never seen it before because I knew my mother never knew about Declan until the incident. Yet since she knew then I never visited his home. His parents never knew he was back either. I started to ask more question I was curious about.
    "Would we live at your house?" I asked not minding the answer of either buying a new house or living in his.
    "I think it would be the best choice to live at my house when were married if you don't mind." he said then the word ran radicly through my head, when were married, when were married, when were married. I didn't take the time to think that I would be spending the rest of my life with a man who been dead for a year. I was still madly in love with him and for the fact that he was dead, I didn't care much it would just be between me, mom and Declan.
    "I don't mind that one bit, but if you don't mind, I would like to see the house if that's no trouble." I said standing up on my feet then I grabbed his hand and helped him up, not that he needed any help.
    "Alright let's go now then." he smiled and kissed me on the forehead and we both started to walk.
     
  14.  Such a sweet story! I love it!
     
  15.  I agree with handk  great story, arimay xx

    loulouxx
     
  16. We both ran down the stairs grasping eachothers hand running our way down the steps and through the door. We both got in my car since Declan didn't have the money for one. I sat in the passangers seat while he got in and slid the keys into the key hole to turn on my car. We soon backed out of the driveway and rode down the rode and past many houses. I laid my head on my hand, which was proped up on the edge of the window by my elbow.
    "My house is hidden in a forest, so I don't have to pay for it and nobody will ever know it's there. The only problem is, it's deep in the woods. It's surrounded by a couple pine trees, than right behind it there's a huge feild covered in blue flowers. There's also a river by it too, it really is a great peacful place to live, I think you will like it." he said smiling driving around a near by corner.
    "Oh, I will like it. It sounds, nice." I said pulling my legs up to my seat and leaning back in my seat to watch him drive.
    "What?" he giggled looking at my then looking back on the rode smiling.
    "Nothing, I was just thinking how happy I was to have you." I said back to him smiling back.
    "Exaclty hpw I feel about you." he said back pulling over to the side when we soon reached more houses. Dusty, ugly old ones. He walked out of the car and opened my car door. We saw a forest right next to he car. Declan held my hand and we started to walk into the forest. I looked around at all the trees as Declan just walked straight forward as if this place had no interest to him what so ever.
    "So, do you walk from my house all the way home?" I asked, it was kind of a stupid question to ask since he didn't have a car. I listened to the answer anyway.
    "Yes, I don't mind much though." he said smiling once again. After we walked a while into the forest Declan picked me up in his arms.
    "I don't think anyone is this far in the woods. Now I could pick you up, I wouldn't want to embarass you in front of the others. I wouldn't want them to get the wrong idea." he said holding me and me holding onto him.
    "Of course." I said mindlessly lost in how big of love I loved him. We talked to eachother and shared giggles to eachother. But then, we came to the house. I can't explain how beautiful it was tge first time I saw it.
     
  17. Aw!!  So Good! I would pay for this story
     
  18. Lol i have s true gost story. Witnessed by my aunt,dad,and thier 2 friends.