Now secret, the big problem i have with your stories is that they are not original.
WAY too many people write about some random teen saving the world even though in all odds they shouldve died at the half of the first book. I hate that idea of their "double life" thing also. Thats commonly used also. They have a normal life at school but like save their friend's lives at night.
In these stories, i can actualy predict the events that happen. When i get bored of reading it, i skip to the end and ushally find im right. Think of something original and dont make it a double-life teen with like a medieval world at home or something along the lines.
You can write this stuff but i wouldnt recommend it. Also think about things that mix, never... EVER write about a 13-15 year old superhero or hero. Brainstorm ideas and write them down. Watch PG-13 movies (none of that disney crap) and try to figure their plot out. Do the same with books but read like lord of the rings tho. That is a hard book to understand, and if ucan get it and remember every detail, you should be writing better by following JRR Tolkein's style.
Pick movies that are hard to understand but extremely well done.
But anyways its up to you
WAY too many people write about some random teen saving the world even though in all odds they shouldve died at the half of the first book. I hate that idea of their "double life" thing also. Thats commonly used also. They have a normal life at school but like save their friend's lives at night.
In these stories, i can actualy predict the events that happen. When i get bored of reading it, i skip to the end and ushally find im right. Think of something original and dont make it a double-life teen with like a medieval world at home or something along the lines.
You can write this stuff but i wouldnt recommend it. Also think about things that mix, never... EVER write about a 13-15 year old superhero or hero. Brainstorm ideas and write them down. Watch PG-13 movies (none of that disney crap) and try to figure their plot out. Do the same with books but read like lord of the rings tho. That is a hard book to understand, and if ucan get it and remember every detail, you should be writing better by following JRR Tolkein's style.
Pick movies that are hard to understand but extremely well done.
But anyways its up to you
Maybe try reading a Oliver twist, mansfield park or pride and prejudice. They're pretty confusing but good.(and all classics) I guess you can say they are cliche but some cliche is good. (My story greeds thorned vines was sprouted from nancy drew and the hardy boys series.)