Now secret, the big problem i have with your stories is that they are not original. WAY too many people write about some random teen saving the world even though in all odds they shouldve died at the half of the first book. I hate that idea of their "double life" thing also. Thats commonly used also. They have a normal life at school but like save their friend's lives at night. In these stories, i can actualy predict the events that happen. When i get bored of reading it, i skip to the end and ushally find im right. Think of something original and dont make it a double-life teen with like a medieval world at home or something along the lines. You can write this stuff but i wouldnt recommend it. Also think about things that mix, never... EVER write about a 13-15 year old superhero or hero. Brainstorm ideas and write them down. Watch PG-13 movies (none of that disney crap) and try to figure their plot out. Do the same with books but read like lord of the rings tho. That is a hard book to understand, and if ucan get it and remember every detail, you should be writing better by following JRR Tolkein's style. Pick movies that are hard to understand but extremely well done. But anyways its up to you
Hell is not knowing I'f your awake considered being insane? I can't even tell the difference beteween dreaming and being awake...... I blurt out randomly in class about napoleon during music... It's a mess. Yet I manage a 3.8..... Oh well secret keep trying! I know you can write a good story
Well yeah just try to improve work on your skills and I know a series way harder to understand then lied of the rings. Read the hitch hikers guide OT the galaxy along with the rest of the series. I've read them 3 times and I still learn so much stuff about the book every time cause it's so flipping confusing
@Marodo Tell me @Secret keep trying Maybe try reading a Oliver twist, mansfield park or pride and prejudice. They're pretty confusing but good.(and all classics) I guess you can say they are cliche but some cliche is good. (My story greeds thorned vines was sprouted from nancy drew and the hardy boys series.) If you want something modern try the rangers apprentice series.
You too feather?! It's one of my favorite series, I absolutely love it. Have you read the brotherband chronicles/series? It's like the spinoff series of rangers apprentice.
Bleh. I just found out now that I'm going to France on Friday and get back on Sunday night (day for most people) So no posts from me on those times.
Maybe… We're going to a seaside area so lots of fish. But I'm fine with fish because we go to China loads, what with my mum being Chinese. I'm likely to eat l'escargot because they're tasty
Yes, my mum is from China, problem? Because I don't want to start any racist stuff. But people are talking religion in WC so I think I'll hack my way into that trench Cheese made awhile back :|