*PielordTy (01)
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Yes I love 85percent dark chocolate
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iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS
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<3 Love.
Anyways, I cannot BELIEVE that Mark Walden killed H.I.V.E.mind.
Anyways, I cannot BELIEVE that Mark Walden killed H.I.V.E.mind.
*PielordTy (01)
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So wrong you've read that series and if ell like me or someone else should make a thread giving the nubs advice like don't post a crappy strip the second you get on the forums
Storallelite
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Ok so I finished the prologue of Greed's thorned vines. Do you want me to post it now or wait until I finish the first chapter?
Storallelite
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Ok got first chapter done...I'll put it up now 
iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS
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Killed him. So far. I still have four more books to read, so...
FeatherHunter
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OH EM GEEZ! GTV IS UP 
*IRONhulk (01)
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Atleast it's average. Looks alot better when it's on paper I probably screwed it up writing on an iPod
FeatherHunter
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COLONIAL!!!! You're not a mod 
FeatherHunter
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@ Everyone who has posted on the feedback thread or read LoKaW - Feather's Version
I made this in the hard outline for several story arcs, but I was thinking GTV (Greeds Thorned Vines) was already detective and stuff, so I bailed on one of my story arcs because I thought GTV would be coming out soon around the time I wrote the hard outline.
Anyway, one of the genres I'm incorporating into the story is mystery as you all know. I made a decision to incorporate a story arc having to do with Truth and Lies, which I trashed. But I brought it back, and I'm hoping that everyone will like it.
What does this have to do with GTV, you're wondering? Well, whenever I read two detective stories at the same time, I usually compare them.
But be warned, mystery and that "Who did what" air is only a portion of the overall story.
Happy Reading,
- FεατηεrΗμnτεr
P.S - I'll be posting Part Two as soon as I finish writing it.
P.S.S - Truth and Lies began in Chapter One, Part One, I just forgot to make the announcement.
I made this in the hard outline for several story arcs, but I was thinking GTV (Greeds Thorned Vines) was already detective and stuff, so I bailed on one of my story arcs because I thought GTV would be coming out soon around the time I wrote the hard outline.
Anyway, one of the genres I'm incorporating into the story is mystery as you all know. I made a decision to incorporate a story arc having to do with Truth and Lies, which I trashed. But I brought it back, and I'm hoping that everyone will like it.
What does this have to do with GTV, you're wondering? Well, whenever I read two detective stories at the same time, I usually compare them.
But be warned, mystery and that "Who did what" air is only a portion of the overall story.
Happy Reading,
- FεατηεrΗμnτεr
P.S - I'll be posting Part Two as soon as I finish writing it.
P.S.S - Truth and Lies began in Chapter One, Part One, I just forgot to make the announcement.
Storallelite
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Erm I didn't understand that...but whatever lol
FeatherHunter
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I guess I didn't really organize what I was trying to say coherently... Basically, I have a story arc I trashed, but revived, known as Truth and Lies. Truth and Lies will be one of the themes of this book.
Truth and Lies is centered around mystery and detection, which GTV is centered around, and I don't want anyone comparing, or I'm afraid of people comparing, my mystery element that I'm incorporating into my story, to yours, Stora.
And a story arc is like a series of events in a book. So Truth and Lies will be in LoKaW, and the readers will have to determine who is responsible for certain things and possible motives for certain characters actions.
For example, Stora, your motive for the upcoming part of Chapter One. Or do you, Stora, really not know her? Hmmmm... Just something to think about.
Truth and Lies is centered around mystery and detection, which GTV is centered around, and I don't want anyone comparing, or I'm afraid of people comparing, my mystery element that I'm incorporating into my story, to yours, Stora.
And a story arc is like a series of events in a book. So Truth and Lies will be in LoKaW, and the readers will have to determine who is responsible for certain things and possible motives for certain characters actions.
For example, Stora, your motive for the upcoming part of Chapter One. Or do you, Stora, really not know her? Hmmmm... Just something to think about.
iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS
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Very good analogy, eagle... o.e