Kinda cheesy. Anyway, Feather. Please don't beg others to read it. I'd have read it anyway. It was good and all, but remember this. Add Cheesemuffin. Broadsword-wielding pyromancer writer.
Feather did u read my poem? Just wondering.... I know it's not that good as cheese pointed out but I want to know how to improve it
And this is what I'm talking about… Feather's arrogance takes over and when he sees someone that doesn't clearly seethe hatred towards him, he makes some kind of read my story post. And you wonder why people get annoyed. But I'm not hear to start arguments so; Writing News Flash. Once again Paradox is too lazy to write anything :3
Ugh Paradox. Your first paragraph makes no sense at all. And InsaneParadox, I'm gonna do me, and you can do you, and that's the way it's supposed to be now stop worrying about what I'm doing and go write. :roll: Now I just woke up so i gotta go drink some hot lemon water, have a cup of cucumber-lemon-banana water, and then eat breakfast Hooray for healthy living!
FOR CRAP'S SAKE, FH. Paradox has a point. EVERY DAMN TIME you post a new chapter, you seek EVERY person who shows the least bit of respect to you and nag them about it. AND THEN, whenever someone points out your arrogance and/or other flaws, you play the "cool" way, saying "I'm above your petty little insults," and "You keep being you, I'll be me" and "Its not my fault I'm valedictorian of whatever-the-hell." You are not a child of god, you do not stand above any of us, and you damn sure are not humble.
When did I say I was valedictorian, lol? And dude, go drink some lemon water. It has calming effects.
Valedictorian, foreign exchange student, president of the god damn poet club, whatever. You are arrogant. Realize that for once.
I've never been the president of a poetry club. I've never been a foreign exchange student. I never admitted to being valedictorian. And what satisfaction would it bring you, Cheesemuffin, if I did say I was arrogant?
Not much, really, just a slight feeling of raised hopes or humanity that you recognize your flaws. I'm surrounded by idiots, judging is what I do best.
Let's just leave Feather in his perfect little world where he isn't the biggest 'sinner' ever, his world where God speaks to him and lies him about how he isn't a sinner, the world where we're his egotistical subjects who need to repent of our wicked ways or we shall burn in the flames of hell. Because I'm sure he'll finally accept that his little fantasy isn't real when he gets a nice big slap around the face from the one girl he somehow managed to form a stable relationship with when he tries to get her to accept her 'sins' and 'allowed God to forgive her for her sinful ways'.
My lemon water tasted really good. Then I had my cucumber-lemon-banana water. Delicious! Top that off with two eggs, blended with milk and seasoning salt, then poured into a bowl and cooked scramble-style. Wow...