The Writer's Café

Oh thats what you meant. Mystery is mystery but it's different depending on the way you present it. So I doubt it'll get compared.
And what do you mean by motive?
 
Feather no offense but please stop telling people to read your story every time you see them post and you have a new chapter...it's getting a tad bit annoying at this point
 
Alright, so I wrote this for my gf a few years ago when we were sort of on the outs. I was sorting my email and came across it for the first time since. It was written pretty quickly, so I'm not looking for any criticism. But feel free if you must. Thanks.

Soulmates

In the beginning Zeus the Almighty created humans with four legs, four arms, and two heads. It was in essence, one singular being. It was this way for eons. Zeus, for whatever reason became extremely jealous of these beings. Some say it was because although they were "one" being, they shared a seperate conciousness, but one soul. Although Zeus created these beings, he did not intend for them to love "each other" and feel a greater affinity to "each other" than to him. So Zeus, angry and jealous, split the beings down the middle, creating humans. Each with their own seperate piece of soul, or half of the original soul. From then on, man, and woman alike, have searched for their other half. Their soulmate. The one that they were destined to be with from the beginning. The one that will make their soul complete.


Blah blah blah..there it is.
 
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