New Found Life Early in the morning awakened by a Crow Anna peers out her window only To find metalic creed wariors aproching quickly she reaches for her bow as They creep ever closer suddenly they Break into a run without thinking anna Fires an arrow into a knights neck Crumpling to the ground one knight Is halted four more continue on their sprint. Shooting off another arrow into a leg she then retreats out the backdoor just as the remaining three break in. Running faster and faster Her heart beat slows eventualy. Now walking, she looks for a shelter. Spoting a large tree and some good wood Anna smiles and says to herself out loud "well things are looking better and at lest I don't have those guys still after me." then feeling two hands on her arm she knows she's in a pickle. The brutes quickly wrestled her the ground. kicking and screaming she resists but they hold her down then the smaller ties Anna up and they heave her on a horse they then the horses gallop untill they reach a camp with a couple hundered people. The larger man puts her in a tent then leaves. Remembering that she has a knife on her side she quitely rubs the rope on it untill it snaps a guard bursts in and draws his sword Anna outmatched with only a dagger grabs a torch the guard slashes out at her. Parrying with the torch and stabing with the dagger her combatent is dead. Anna silently crawls away from the camp. She spys a horse that she moves toward. A guard turns her way she closes her eyes and hurls her knife. Bulls-eye hit him perfectly she thinks "I impress myself somtimes." hurrying to the horse, jumping on, and riding away. Anna rides untill she reached a tavern. Inside a man is telling storys about the land they are in. Out of curiosity she starts to listen "Before your time __ united a strong group of warriors refered to now as metalic creed. He united them in the hope that they would one day rule every kingdom" "Wow........." Escaped anna's mouth "But why dosnt someone try to stop them" "Some have" said the story teller "but, those who have.." Being inturupted by two brutes bursting in he quickly finished his sentance "this is what happens to those who do" crushing a loaf of bread he quickly disappears. Anna tries to unsheath her dagger but it was too late the brutes were alreddy within strikking distance. She grabbes a chair and yells "bar fight" beer bottles flying she gets to the ground as the fight worsens she sees a woman close a door a disides to follow her. As Anna opened the door a must smell escapes the cellar "that stinks" but her own will doesn't listen to the stench. pursuing the dark damp passage as it gets narower and the seiling gets closer she finds herself in a wine cellier thinking "I hit the jackpot" she grabbs one just then the wall spins around "SWEET" Anna thinks. walking Down a spiral stair case she slows when she hears voices "we must stop the advance of the metalic creed if their not stoped we will be forced to move back across the sea." Another deeper voice much like Christopher Lee's "calm down they will be stoped." Anna had been reading lots of novels at this point a guard is right behind the person spying. spinning around and thrusting her dagger the guard crumpled to the floor without a noise. "man I'm good" Anna thinks then just as the words escape her cherry color lips a dart flys into her neck.
SW walks into the cafe, gets a good cup of coffee and sits down to write on his new story "Fields of Heaven" saying hi to everyone as well
Feather walks in and calls SW and Irin and Stora over, “My friends,”he says. “I've need of guidance with my next chapter of KaW Chronicles, here's what I have so far: Chapter Two: Part (1/2) Lynet's View I didn't eat lunch that day, I was so furious. Instead I'd spent lunch time sketching De Anakolumian which means The Palace of The Ocean. It's beautiful,I thought. Let me explain some things to you. (Special thanks to Irin for letting me borrow her innocence idea of a guide book) This book was made specially for the KaW Realm. The author's name is King Teja. No one knows if he still exists although there's always a possibility. Page 782-Article A-Sentences 4-12. De Anakolumian is a Palace,rumored to be the home of The Ocean Gods. It has a grand door,with intricate designs that tell the history of KaW. Such as Majesty's Kingdom which still hasn't been found. It has a beautiful observatory looking out towards the Realm of KaW. Even more rooms accommodate the palace including a giant library, Crinus's Passage which leads towards Cheese's Forge and the Lands of Fire, The Realm Communications Room which is connected to the Pillar of Communications and many more. I closed the book and put down my quill and paper.
-Long day- Star thinks. He was still cursed. Then he remembered something. He managed to knock open a compartment and a vial fell. He drank some of it then returned to normal.
I'm making a sneak peak for the next chapter of Revolution. Chapter 6 - A Traitor's Secret ---------------------------------------------------- Smighter and Spottedleaf had been walking for several hours, wandering endlessly through the wasteland. However, no amount of laborious trudging could have prepared them for what was about to happen. Seconds after that moment, the whole plain they were on erupted. ---- Poptarts finally arrived at the village Corinthian had led him to, exhausted from his travels. His legs ached, and Corinth was furious from his tired complaints along the way. However, there was no time for arguments. He hurried to the inn, got a room, and went to sleep. A few hours later, he was attacked by the NightMare.
I need help with chapter 2 people I already posted it but I need help with it I'm just not feeling the vibe
You can do a risky move: Don't write it for a few days, and let the idea come naturally, OR You can do a safe move: Read other people's stories, and let them influence you
Feather, it's good, but why don't you try clans or something, write about clan wars maybe? (The epic ones thou)
I just write while im thinking about it, I make it up as I go along (mystery story's I would seriously fail at)
Speaking of Medieval.... I have an idea!! For the sequel of Revolution (yes, there will be a sequel) The storyline will be *CENSORED FOR DRAMATIC EFFECT*