The Writer's Café

I thought of one little scene recently. Would be cool to work it into a story. I have the intro forming in my head. I'll try to write it soon. Hard with An ISU and Exams to worry about.

 

And the cafe is good once again

 

Star you got a lot of people willing to help u, just so you know

 

Medieval themes aren't exhausted, it's mainly assassin themes if u ask me.
@Feather it's nice and simple. You can draw your ideas from other books or things that have happened in KaW.(Ex. Fox/iG war)

 

Chapter Two: Part (1/2)

Lynet's View

I didn't eat lunch that day, I was so furious.
Instead I'd spent lunch time sketching De Anakolumian which means The Palace of The Ocean.
It's beautiful,I thought.
Let me explain some things to you.

(Special thanks to Irin for letting me borrow her innocence idea of a guide book)

This book was made specially for the KaW Realm. The author's name is King Teja.
No one knows if he still exists although there's always a possibility.

Page 782-Article A-Sentences 4-12.
De Anakolumian is a Palace,rumored to be the home of The Ocean Gods.
It has a grand door,with intricate designs that tell the history of KaW. Such as Majesty's Kingdom which still hasn't been found.
It has a beautiful observatory looking out towards the Realm of KaW.
Even more rooms accommodate the palace including a giant library, Crinus's Passage which leads towards Cheese's Forge and the Lands of Fire, The Realm Communications Room which is connected to the Pillar of Communications and many more.

I closed the book and put down my quill and paper.

I found Jerad in the Library sitting in a satin an blue chair.
I snuggled up to him without a sound my head on his shoulder.
“I'm sorry the way I acted at breakfast,” I said. “It's just I'm scared.”
“What about,” he said.
“If I told you they'd find me.” she whispered.
“What are you reading,” she said,swiftly changing the subject.


Blah blah blah
When I finish it'll have something to do with either tyr and Aries or tn3u and fanfic

 

Maybe I'll work on the short intro later.

@Stora: you definetly have that part right.

 

@Feather: Good job.

 

Ok, not exhausted, but getting repetitive as people copy settings, wish something new and inventive came along, maybe I could do it?

 

It's kinda hard to do something out of the ordinary(not medieval), if u do future u need to create a lot of new things and make sure it's relevant to the future.(eg.laser)

 

Oh, pls tell us!

 

I've got an idea on how i can introduce crinus


In crinus's passage
crinus will shoot a warning arrow not knowing its one of his good friends jerad
jerad will be all like whoa dude its me and blah blah blah and then...


ok so im gonna give crinus the gift of sight so he'll notice a crown on Lynet's head and he'll stare at her intensely and blah blah blah message silently passes between them that i dont know shes queen and not to tell him
and thats the idea lol

 

Does everyone think midevil themes are too used should I scratch my story and write about the 7 days war?

 

I'll post chp 2 if u guys want

 

Been writing a bit. Here's what I got so far.


Thump

The shaking woke me from my sleep.

Thump

I opened my eyes and drowzily sat up. It was definetly more powerful that time. I glanced at the clock on my table, it was still early morning. What could it be?

Thump

The vibrations threw me from the bed. I muttered rude comments in frustration and reached for the curtains.

"NOW WHAT THE-" I stopped as I looked outside.

Several stories down, the city was in Chaos. Bombers roared through the skies, building crumbling under their explosive wrath. Miltary vehicles and infantry swarmed the city, civilians running in terror. 

I added one more word to my sentence. Suddenly a rumble filled the air, quickly growing in volume. I glanced into the hallway in confusion. Three soliders were running by.

"GET OUT OF THE WAY!" One of them yells.

Moments later a ship came barreling down the hallway, running over the troops and stopping right by my door.

Despite the flaming scene, I soon learned this was not a crash, but a landing party. The hatch opened and the invaders climbed out.

I rushed into my room for weapons, sounds like I was going to be fighting today.

 

I like it but you need a little more info on bombers and stuff discribe the people screaming in the city or the stench of war
or perhaps discribe the pain of shards into your arm/body/ect

 

Wanna read my story? Tell me what u think?

 

I didn't plan on explaining it all yet. More of a "I'm getting too far ahead." for part 2, then explain what exactly is happening.

 

@ star awesome dude i love it and ill be using that the groups must be divided thing in my fanfic if you don't mind

@ everyone I edited KaW Chronicles the last post with the fight and junk and think yall will like it.

@ star or stora whichever wrote it i like the short story but matt wasnt supposed to be there neither was risana........