Some of my poems and thought

Can I right down one of mine? =]

 

It's not my best:

Looking out the window
Glaring through the night
I close my eyes
And open up
But nothing feeling right
I push away
Wonder why
But still my mind is blank
Close my eyes
And open up
Standing in the rain
It's pouring down
It's hailing now
But nothing feels the same
Nothing feeling right
I look at you
My feelings true
Your pouring down
Flooding me
Rising up
Yet sinking deep
But still I wonder why
Looking out the window
Glaring through the night

 

@killzone, I like it.

 

I wrote this one when I was blahh
But Ill just put it anyways..

Putting the magnum to my head
Prepared to pull it
Everythings wrong with me
Shouldn't have to show it
Repeating everyday
The same mistakes
Nothing left to give
Jet take this life away
Blood on the floor
Nobody wants me anymore

 

And thank youu btw :]

 

Irin I love your poems, I seriously cried after reading one :].

 

Thanks Killzone. Which one, may I ask?

That last one you wrote was powerful. It really made me feel something. A little scared.

 

I just read a few. They are good

 

Thanks guys! I wish I had some more to show you, but I think I'm out of all my good ones.

 

I know what you mean. Tmeveryone thinks it's wierd just because it's something they can't do. But if you show them to the right people, you get respect and appretation(sp?)

 

Np.

 

Yes! I found a poem I had forgotten! I'll post in a sec.