Trying to come up with that best inspirational poem or writing that will help others when they're feeling down and alone. Not going to well
It's okay. I find that when I'm looking for inspiration, it doesn't come easily. I just have sit back and relax, and take a break from writin. When I know I'm ready to go back, I can write something.
The following three poems are a trilogy. Please do not post untill I'm done. Irin #5 Here I am Here I am, lost and lonely, feeling one, feeling only. Wishing hard with all my might, here I am in dark of night. Here I am, just over here. Can't you see me? I'm so near, lost in this unknowing place, lost without your friendly face. Here I am, waiting for you. Here I am, so cold, so blue. Don't dare go, so far away. Stay with me, for one more day. Here I am, tears in my eyes. You walk away, that's no surprise, I wonder now, if this could be. Am I here? Is this me?
Irin#6 I know I'm here I know I'm here, the pain is real. If I am not how can I feel? Shakeing now, the moments lost. One mistake, has so much coast. I know I'm here, alive, and well, though with my heart it's hard to tell. You and I was all that mattered, and with you gone my dreams are scattered. I know I'm here, my world I'd spinning, I'm so confused, my hearts not winning. Then and now, no turning back. I'm looking forward, count on that. I know i'm here, and I'm still shocked. You walked away, your heart was locked. I must be strong, I have to try, I know I'm here. I will survive.
Irin #7 Made of Stone I feel my heart, it's made of stone. I guess that happens when your alone. Rain could fall, fall from the sky, but should it matter? I don't see why. You ask me now, how I let go, when there was much so long ago. You look at me, into my eyes. I look at yours, and I see lies. And even when you beg and plead, and go so low, down on your knee, I look away, for, I can't withstand, how somone like you won't understand. It's a fact, stone makes my heart. What else would happen? We were apart Two seperat souls, two seperate ways. I made it work, survived those days. And even though the sun must set, I'm happy I feel, not one regret. But know the facts. I'm done with you. Live with it, and know, were through. The end
Np. The way I see it, this thread should not be aloud to reach the 2nd page. This is one of my fav threads. And I'm sure you'll get a new poem soon. Just write about the stuff you know, the stuff you don't know, and all the stuuf in between.