Some of my poems and thought

Irin #8
Summer Ray

look about a summer day
all misguided people stray,
looking for a better way,
to spend another 'too warm day'

and me? I look about it too,
and find so many things to do,
while other people wish away,
such a perfect summer day.

And I, I take a Ray of sun,
and save it for, when there's no fun,
save it for another time,
another time, when it can shine,

so when the seasons turn around,
and it's to cold to make a sound,
I take out my summer Ray,
from that perfect summer day.

 

I like it sun!

 

Thanks Colonial!

 

I  all these poems 

 

Thanks Nelle

 

I wish I had a talent for writing poems... 

 

I'm sure you could, if you had the right inspiration! 

 

Thanks irin 

 

Np!

 

#5 is my favorite
But 5 6 & 7 both made me cry :[

Yeahh, I wasn't dealing with some things in a good way when I wrote that one. I'm gonna be writing another tonight. My others arnt that good. Writing helps me get by especially poems. I'm so happy I can put them on here now too :]!

You guys are thee best!

 

I wrote those three at the beginning of summer. I'm glad you liked them! 

 

And good luck writing your next poem.
Writing has also helped me through some tough times. I love writing so much. It's what I want to do for the rest of my life.

 

It's not good I just wrote it quick
I couldn't think of much tonight...
But I'd rather just get it out of my head

Close my fate
Cover my ears
Soul sleeping
Eyes bleeding
You better still be reading

I can't believe we listened
Ant believe we did
Makes me feel insane
And covered up in sins
That you put me in

So tell me why you did it
Why to me?
Why to her?
I want you to fear
Like I
I will NOW make this LOUD and CLEAR

You took out lives away
When you pulled them down
That day
I didn't understand
I thought it all was fine
Even when you made us cry

You teenage girls
Are adults now
Still living wonderful lives
I am still growing
Still knowing
Soon time will fly on by
And you will die a crime

Not much left to say
To the two of you
I'll see you one day soon
Don't doubt it
This isn't goodbye.

 

That was good. I like it!

 

Thanks I guess it was morebof a thought thoughh.

 

*more of

 

Burp

 

Bump!

 

Irin #9
I wish I was the ocean, I would pound across the sand.
I wish I was a mountain, I would look across the land.
I wish I was the wind, I could blow and stir a sight.
I wish I was the moon, looking down throughout the night.

I wish I was an eagle, flying through the sky,
I wish I was a cloud, gently floating by.
I wish I was a