Some of my poems and thought

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by colonial, Dec 9, 2009.

  1. My favourite quote is "someone up there might think your specail, but the rest of us down here thin your a plonker"lol
     
  2. I honestly don't want this getting lost. This wax the very first poems thread, and it has some history to it
     
  3. Dude. It was. I thought mine was. Nm
     
  4. Lol. Np my friend
     
  5. Dug up a bunch of poetry while cleaning out my hard drive. Decided to revive this thread with it.
    Here's a free verse poem I wrote last year
    If you live in a place where there is always light
    The coming of night has never felt right
    You bask in the evening sun
    But when darkness comes you start to run

    But run to where?
    The darkness will come
    Sounds that you cannot bear
    They will never be gone

    As the sun sets speedily behind you
    Shadows begin to lengthen
    A lone wolf cries out to its brethren
    You start to wonder what will happen to you

    As the all consuming darkness approaches
    You know that all is lost
    Every step seems to take ages
    You tumble to a bed of dead moss

    You cannot see
    Threatening shadows riding the breeze
    Like the claws of death
    They take your breath

    Like a knife through hot butter
    You remember a time of light
    When everything seemed so right
    You cough, you sputter

    Then are no more…

    And this is a haiku that went with it.

    No longer quiet
    Blackness hides all
    Darker sounds I hear
     
  6. Here's my newest one.

    I'll Love You Forever

    Don't ever forget, what you said to me, 
    On the day we first kissed, by the trunk of our tree,
    You said that you'd love me, year after year,
    You said that you loved me, and that was my fear.

    Commitment had scared me, mistakes of my past.
    But you said our love was one that would last.
    And I loved you so deeply, I had to believe, 
    So I helped make our goal, one we could achieve.

    We married four years, right after that day.
    "I'll love you forever," is what you still say.
    And year after year, that promise you keep,
    From when we awake, to when we both sleep.

    But time had to pass, we were over the hill,
    "I'll love you for always," is what you say, still.
    You smiled your smile, and my eyes had shone,
    And for so many years, I was never alone.

    Then one rainy day, in a hospital bed,
    "You know I still love you," is what you had said.
    "I'll meet you in heaven, and thanks for the ride.
    I'll love you forever. I'll be at your side."
     
  7. The sun will set and rise,
    A performance for your eyes.
    But in the darkest of hours,
    The moon, our friend never cowers.
    But if the moon shall fail to glow,
    Small lights called stars will show.
    The moon and the sun are friends.
    And will be till the very end.

    It's not the best poem I just wrote it along the way.
     
  8. Betrayal can come from nowhere,
    Like a stab in the back,
    You thought you were going somewhere,
    But your "friends" had other plans,
    From friend to foe,
    They leave you to your woes,

    Betrayal can leave you,
    without friends,
    without purpose,
    And like a stab in the back,
    They leave you.

    Seth
     
  9. Nice poem. Here's another one.
    Time passes everyday,
    And it can show on everyones face.
    As your energy begins to go all you can say,
    Life goes by fast, go at your own pace.
     
  10. Bump for Colonial.
     
  11. Some deep sad poems 56 pages actuly .... Well it's not a poem but I think I'll like it it's my favorite saying

    Light travels faster than sound that is why some people seem bright untill they open there mouth
     
  12. Bump..... I'd like this to stay alive
     
  13. I like that picture quote
     
  14. Great poems everyone! Here's a fun little haiku.

    Haikus are easy,
    Sometimes they don't make much sense,
    Refrigerator.