Some of my poems and thought

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by colonial, Dec 9, 2009.

  1. Semi rhythmic thought**
     
  2. Colonial the last poem reminded me of myself
     
  3. I was just thinking and made this up on the spot. Could be a bit dark though.

    A demon lives inside myself.
    I let it run free.
    Too scared to admit the truth.

    Now I'm back,
    Ready to face my demon,
    To let go of it all.
    The little demon I once knew,
    Had grown a lot since I last faced him.
    He had gotten better at torturing me,
    I was scared again,
    I wanted to run,
    But if I did that,
    I'd have to face it again,
    And my demon would only get harder to defeat.

    I'm not really that good at poetry, so tell me what u think
     
  4. Great job WW!
     
  5. Thx pory! I'm glad u liked it
     
  6. Your welcome
     
  7. Hi,im a reporter from newsy news! May I interview u?
     
  8. A Haiku

    My Dog

    I open the door
    You come running and cheerful
    No one else greets me
     
  9. Umm here's a shot!

    Day has ended,
    But night is gone,
    Time has stopped,
    Yet I walk on,
    Into the havens,
    Where I'll be free,
    To live in peace,
    Eternally,
    My time has come,
    I fear it not,
    Unto this earth I say,
    Farewe-elllll


    There you go 
     
  10. Very good my friend
     
  11. This isn't a poem, but I was in the writing mood

    Trying to think of some wise words, and then realizes; WHAT ARE WISE WORDS? To me, wise words are something you day, and truely believe. Depending of the listeners, and how they inturpret what the meaning is, what you say is wise to them. So next time you talk with someone, whether it's towards a friend, a family member, or a complete stranger, don't try to sound intelligent, be yourself. Who knows, what you say could make a huge difference in someones life. Think about it
     
  12. Wow. That was really deep. I'll have to remember that.
     
  13. Thoughtful...just makes me think a little more. 
     
  14. Though they seem insignificant, words are the most powerful weapon, or tool we have. Choose your words wisely, and take what others have to say, into heart.
     
  15. Woah.
    Deep, dude.
    That was deep.
     
  16. Here's a poem

    Colonial doesn't eat bolonial, so he and his cronials rode zambonials
     
  17. I'm not hatin' I be rhymin 