Some of my poems and thought

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by colonial, Dec 9, 2009.

  1. Lol I like the refrigerator part.
     
  2. I look over my shoulder
    leaving behind all that I knew,
    all my friends and old memories.
    I look ahead
    and see new experiences,
    friends and memories to be made.
    But I never forget those I am leaving behind.
    Without them I am nothing.
     
  3. Deep. Love the poem!
     
  4. Could someone write a sad poem? I'm sad right now
     
  5. That's fricken deep
     
  6. I walk down the street
    People are staring,
    pointing,
    laughing
    I try to fit in, but
    i can't
    why can't I be accepted for me?
    Why do I even try?
    Can't they see it's hurting me?
    PLEASE STOP CRITICIZING!
    please stop!
    Stop.....


    Ummm...... How's that?
     
  7. Pory?

    Dude??
     
  8. Pory? You okay??
     
  9. Yeah I'm fine :)
     
  10. Good job on the poem :)
     
  11. This one may be a bit dark..... But I want people to think about it, and actually think! And please, do not post anything hurtful about my next poem.
     
  12. He begins to cry
    But no ones there to listen
    He feels so much pain!
    So much suffering!
    He reaches out his hand,
    But no one grabs hold.
    He stretches it out further,
    Yet no one notices.
    He feels lost,
    Forgotten.
    He wants out,
    He only sees darkness.
    He yells,
    But no one can hear.
    Sobbing now he becomes desperate,
    Now everyone notices,
    Now everyone cares.....
    They are too late...
    He squeezes the trigger........
     
  13. OMG! I teared up when I read that! It's so deep..Great job
     
  14. Your welcome.
     
  15. The power of words are at work
     
  16. Btw, liked the last poem, col. Made me think about something...
     
  17. I'm not one for poetry, so I have classified this as a semi rhythmic

    In the light there are always shadows
    In the dark some light can shine
    In every good intention has some hidden evil
    And no evil exists without a hint of good
    Not blacks or whites but shades of grey
    Nothing is ever as simple as it seems