The peace of the world I have not yet found but in my heart I found light is bound. I go into darkness knowing no fears for I know what shall come a smile with tears
I take all away to not share my pain they have done good I shall go alone again it pains me to go on all alone in the dark but I must do this I only wish you to hark
Not bad...but have your poems been published. One of mine has, but I think it sucks, so I guess some editors are retards...lol
All I know is nobody better steal anybodys poems on here or I'll hunt you down! Poetry is what I'm falling back on if my chemistry field doesn't work out =| My sisters got published It was a joke poem about my step sis She called her sammy the cat Yeahh my step sis is a freak.... Really she is...
Kk...here's an old one of mine, tell ne what ya think... Our freedom is gone, Its been taken away There are those who would find it Yet all they do is stray As rare as a diamond, Or rarer it seems Where could it have gone, 'Sides a river of screams The lost cannot find it It is left up to you But the wind wears the welcome So alone you are too For Freedom's gone missing And it gleans in the night Yet none can retrieve it, But those few who still fight. Criticism welcome, btw
Oh wait, I've got one that suits me and KaW very well... The World is Chaos With Destruction and much War Me, I sit in Peace. There's a name for these types of short poems, I just can't remember. And I'm not making any reference in it to the clan Chaos
To each new day it brings a new experience wether bad or good be grateful by the way i your words