Some of my poems and thought

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by colonial, Dec 9, 2009.

  1. I like the recent one, that's something I can relate too.  
     
  2. So here they are among us young
    Eating at our souls
    We are hung
    Hand me the gun
    Hand me the knives
    This has started to get fun

    Release all the anger
    They shed on us all
    Show them we don't fear
    This is where they start to crawl

    They run and try to hide
    For we won't give in
    Take the knives
    And bring on sin

    Show them now
    And show them how
    For we have risen
    And they are down
     
  3. We are prisoners in this war
    A war full of torture
    A war called life

    Who are we to eachother
    Are we really here
    Is it only me
    Are you even near
    We are alone
    In this war
    In this war
    It's so simple...

    We don't get out alive
    Nobody ever has
    We are all full of sins
    We can never ever win

    This war of many years
    Is just a game
    A game
    of
    shame
     
  4. Ah Killzone your poems are quite the reads here as well..so dark they are of the realities that lie underneath much.
     
  5. When the school day ends
    I weep with sadness
    this school, I can say,
    has increased my madness

    none here are normal
    none here are good
    if only they had hearts...
    They really should
     
  6. awe thank you Gabe
     
  7. She frightens me
    Scares me skin deep
    Rips me to shreds
    But honey, don't you see
    I'm already dead
     
  8. @Conq: School is such a trepidtious place and a muderous one at that.. And people can be cruel but you know what, don't let them stop ya, just keep on going, be better than them...

    @Killzone: Yw and you're new one, although short, still has an impact, specifically with the last line.
     
  9. Also if you wish to see anymore of my writings just look on the forum TimeToRead (I haven't written poems in awhile so most of them are on a site, just haven't uploaded them here).
     
  10. FREEDOM

    Light the torch of etenal spirit
    Let it's flame illuminate the depths of your being
    Have it spark inspiration within yourself
    Watch as the spark grow into a dazzaling BLAZE!
    and watch as it turns into a wildfire
    Spread it from person from person
    Hold out your hand and ignite the souls of others

    LET NOTHING PUT OUT THIS BLAZE
    FIND THAT FLAME OF FREEDOM
    AND GROW IT WITH PRIDE
     
  11. Darkness closing in on all sides
    The path is lost
    My body's cold
    Tormented souls scream dispair

    I try to run
    But to no avail
    They incircle from above
    And from below

    All emotions are overcome
    A feeling so dark
    So cold

    I yell for help
    But not a sound comes out
    I curl up
    Hoping for a way out 

    They reach for me
    Trying to steal my being
    HELP! I cry
    Distraught and scared

    All i hear is saddness
    All I hear is silence
    All I hear is darkness
     
  12. You left me once again
    to go f your other friends
    what was I just a toy
    who is your next ploy
    you think you dominate
    but all I see in you now is hare
    you use me all the time
    to you I'm worth a dime
    never notice my love for you
    never realize the truth do you?
    Here I am blue and lonely
    I wish there was someone to hold me
    but nit ever again will it be you
    you are nothing my boo
    the sad thing is
    that's not true
    because I still do love you

    I feel worthless now
    i hope your happy
    go out and drink
    go out and party
    just know your hurting me
    and soon you'll be running back
    and soon I'll be alive again
    but also dead
     
  13. Hey killzone
     
  14. Not feeling the greatest either I see
     
  15. Those Days

    I remember those times of serenity.
    How I wish to have those days,
    The times me and you would show our smiles,
    And never fear what others thought.

    Tender whispers between the two of us,
    Touches that would cause such exquisite noises to escape our lips...
    Oh how I wish those days returned!

    Now these days we seem farther apart,
    We still speak in whispers to each other,
    Constant reminders to each other of what we were,
    The one thing we could never truly let go.

    These days we are hiding from each other,
    Hiding behind emotions and fears of our own,
    That one day we may come again.

    When that day happens,
    It'll become Those Days again,
    The days I remember in blissful glee with you,
    Without having to hide our smiles from each other,
    Those Days were when we could say "I Love You" to one another...
     
  16. Hm made on the spot...It's never easy letting go neh...? I think it's harder waiting though for the day that they may return completely to you though..