Some of my poems and thought

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by colonial, Dec 9, 2009.

  1. I once wrote a poem about death, now every1 at school thinks I'm slightly suicidal

    as I leave this world
    to a place untold
    some things I loose
    some things I gain

    for who is to know
    what lies beyond
    some things I loose
    some things I gain

    I leave behind a happy life
    something that seems a joyous triffle
    some things I loose
    somethings I gain

    but now I am in a quiet place
    the agony the pain a bitter taste
    some things I loose
    some things I gain
     
  2. I hate that. It annoys the he'll out of me
     
  3. The school, kids thinking your suicidal thing I mean.


    Good poem
     
  4. Oh thanks, most have forgotten by now
    btw, that's not the original poem, I made that one up
     
  5. Acctually that is original Seth
    nice work
     
  6. I looked through these before and gotta say I enjoy them quite a lot. I haven't written poetry in a good while but if I find some old ones I'll share them with you. And I understand that thing about school. My English teachers though I had quite the issues considering my stories were very grotesque.
     
  7. "To Be Strong" , date issued July 13, 2008. (at least on the site that is what is stated).

    It never was easy being strong for everyone,
    But what is done is done.
    The damage has already settled,
    The mind now in a scuttle.

    I wish this antagonizing mind of mine would dissappear,
    Like the winds that blow gently through the sears.
    Time can only tell how the outcome will be,
    If I dare stay strong,
    Or let myself collapse onto these aching feet.

    I tire of this endless cycle that bears my breath,
    Only going round and round until I hear death.
    Oh what a terrible sound,
    So profound!

    Anyone out there to hear the howling cry,
    Can you not see these eyes that are wanting to be shut tight?
    Tears flow down gently those soft cheeks,
    Shedding themselves onto those blood streaks.
    I am only Human.
     
  8. Wow
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  9. Ass stay off this thread this is not for arguing.
     
  10. And gmoney is the one that was suppose to be banned or at least thats what was being spoken off.
     
  11. Random writing on January 12, 2010

    So let's just let the air fill with the ecstasy of our burning needs and wants and just maybe...just maybe...someone will see and quell that flame in us...to the point we can enjoy it and not it hurt us anymore.
     
  12. I just spent an hour Reading this whole thread. Great job colonial u are a very good poet u shoul copy these down in a book. Then publish it I would get it for sure.
     
  13. Thx. But not all are mine.
     
  14. That's y after all of yours in back u put others poems