Revolution Feedback and chat

*IRONhulk (01) · Sep 6, 2011

Cheese I'm anxiously waiting for the trolls in the abyss to appear! Your story is good but we should find the original and compare the two.

cheesemuffin · Sep 7, 2011

NOTE APP. Y U MAKE CHAPTERS SEEM LONGER THAN THEY ARE.

*iPimella (01) · Sep 7, 2011

Why might they have been drinking?

-Lupus- · Sep 7, 2011

cheesemuffin said:
Hey guys! If you want to criticize or compliment Revolution, here's the place!

Lol no but i would like a cheese muffin

Eagleking · Sep 7, 2011

Bonfifi · Sep 7, 2011

Nice chapter! (Insert emoji because my new phone distracted me from downloading emoji on my new phone)

FeatherHunter · Sep 7, 2011

AWESOME...NESS...ACHIEVED!

Storallelite · Sep 7, 2011

Great! You really had me at the point where cheese was about to make his descision

Willow564 · Sep 7, 2011

Wow just wow

I was like then I was like

Great chapter great story cannot wait for the next chapter

matzah · Sep 9, 2011

Hey cheese I know u can write better... Use those skills you learned in class!

Eagleking · Sep 14, 2011

Ye olde bump.

cheesemuffin · Sep 14, 2011

The bump is much appreciated.

I begin writing new chapter in T-minus 3 hours!

Wrathbane · Sep 14, 2011

I better be in there! Been waiting for a new one xD

Eagleking · Sep 14, 2011

I shalt prepare my cake!

cheesemuffin · Sep 15, 2011

Spibabilladidliskqksjapsbslavaksbapvadilido!

I'M DA SCATMAN!

Bonfifi · Sep 15, 2011

IM DA SCATMAN! SCHIBBDYDEDODOODODOAMBEDDEDO!

cheesemuffin · Sep 15, 2011

That feeling if grief when nobody posts feedback on your story... It is like no other.

D:

Eagleking · Sep 15, 2011

Great update!!! Clowns.... 

Empress_of_Shadows · Sep 15, 2011

Wrathbane is green?:0 omg

*IRONhulk (01) · Sep 15, 2011

Eh still waiting for what happened to the troll army! Other than that great update