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[*IRONhulk (01)]

What happened to the troll army!!!!

 

[cheesemuffin]

They're there, I just forgot to mention them

 

[*IRONhulk (01)]

Awwwwww they sounded cooool but what happens now you made it like the day kaw stood still

 

[matzah]

Awww, you would rather hear about trolls than me?

 

[FeatherHunter]

I like your character.

 

[matzah]

ty feather i like your character as well

 

[FeatherHunter]

I don't like how my character is portrayed in the story. I was thinking more along the lines of badass. Like a snake in the grass type person. I like that cheese is putting me in and I love the story, but Feather is more along the lines of several meanings in one sentence.

Sorta like several unsaid ulterior motives through a simple paragraph like above. Catch my drift, cheese? Probably not. There are so many drifts to decipher...

 

[matzah]

I mean i would love to write a story, and i could prob do it, i just dont think i would have the time to do it, or after so long where to go with it

but ya i understand how that would make you mad

 

[FeatherHunter]

I was thinking of trying to cowrite a story earlier...

 

[matzah]

mmmmm... ya. Its difficult... but i might try and start one... but not sure

 

[*iPimella (01)]

Don't tell an author how to write his story feth! That's like the number one rule 

By submitting a character you should have opened yourself to the idea that the author is allowed to do ANYTHING THEY WANT with it.

 

[FeatherHunter]

I never told him how to write it. Not once.

New number one rule: Never put words in Feather's mouth (in this case thumbs)

 

[Storallelite]

Pretty good. A suggestion: Try not to mix past and present POV's too much. It can get the readers confused.

 

[*Irin (01)]

Interesting. Moar?

 

[cheesemuffin]

Not today, I have stuff to do

 

[Empress_of_Shadows]

Feather dont blame cheese. You did the same thing with my character in your book. Opposited. But i didnt mention it i think..

 

[*iPimella (01)]

And you did the same thing with Callia on your story. And Irin's character on the KaW chronicles.

 

[Bonfifi]

And Zaln did that to my character in an old story.

I don't care though

 

[matzah]

I heard a new part might come out soon

Inside information is fun

 

[cheesemuffin]

Yeah... About that...

Guys, please tell John here how regular my posting schedule is -.-