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What happened to the troll army!!!!

 

Awwwwww they sounded cooool but what happens now you made it like the day kaw stood still

 

Awww, you would rather hear about trolls than me?

 

I like your character.

 

ty feather i like your character as well

 

I don't like how my character is portrayed in the story. I was thinking more along the lines of badass. Like a snake in the grass type person. I like that cheese is putting me in and I love the story, but Feather is more along the lines of several meanings in one sentence.

Sorta like several unsaid ulterior motives through a simple paragraph like above. Catch my drift, cheese? Probably not. There are so many drifts to decipher...

 

I mean i would love to write a story, and i could prob do it, i just dont think i would have the time to do it, or after so long where to go with it

but ya i understand how that would make you mad

 

I was thinking of trying to cowrite a story earlier...

 

mmmmm... ya. Its difficult... but i might try and start one... but not sure

 

Don't tell an author how to write his story feth! That's like the number one rule 

By submitting a character you should have opened yourself to the idea that the author is allowed to do ANYTHING THEY WANT with it.

 

I never told him how to write it. Not once.

New number one rule: Never put words in Feather's mouth (in this case thumbs)

 

Pretty good. A suggestion: Try not to mix past and present POV's too much. It can get the readers confused.

 

Interesting. Moar?

 

Feather dont blame cheese. You did the same thing with my character in your book. Opposited. But i didnt mention it i think..

 

And you did the same thing with Callia on your story. And Irin's character on the KaW chronicles.

 

And Zaln did that to my character in an old story.

I don't care though

 

I heard a new part might come out soon

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