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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Aug 11, 2011.

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  1. Cheese I'm anxiously waiting for the trolls in the abyss to appear! Your story is good but we should find the original and compare the two.
     
    #321 *IRONhulk (01), Sep 6, 2011
  2. NOTE APP. Y U MAKE CHAPTERS SEEM LONGER THAN THEY ARE.
     
    #322 cheesemuffin, Sep 7, 2011
  3. Why might they have been drinking?
     
    #323 *iPimella (01), Sep 7, 2011

  4. Lol no but i would like a cheese muffin
     
    #324 -Lupus-, Sep 7, 2011
  5. [​IMG]
     
    #325 Eagleking, Sep 7, 2011
  6. Nice chapter! (Insert emoji because my new phone distracted me from downloading emoji on my new phone)
     
    #326 Bonfifi, Sep 7, 2011
  7. AWESOME...NESS...ACHIEVED!
     
    #327 FeatherHunter, Sep 7, 2011
  8. Great! You really had me at the point where cheese was about to make his descision
     
    #328 Storallelite, Sep 7, 2011
  9. Wow just wow


    I was like then I was like

    Great chapter great story cannot wait for the next chapter
     
    #329 Willow564, Sep 7, 2011
  10. Hey cheese I know u can write better... Use those skills you learned in class!
     
    #330 matzah, Sep 9, 2011
  11. Ye olde bump.
     
    #331 Eagleking, Sep 14, 2011
  12. The bump is much appreciated.

    I begin writing new chapter in T-minus 3 hours!
     
    #332 cheesemuffin, Sep 14, 2011
  13. I better be in there! Been waiting for a new one xD
     
    #333 Wrathbane, Sep 14, 2011
  14. I shalt prepare my cake!
     
    #334 Eagleking, Sep 14, 2011
  15. Spibabilladidliskqksjapsbslavaksbapvadilido!

    I'M DA SCATMAN!
     
    #335 cheesemuffin, Sep 15, 2011
  16. IM DA SCATMAN! SCHIBBDYDEDODOODODOAMBEDDEDO!
     
    #336 Bonfifi, Sep 15, 2011
  17. That feeling if grief when nobody posts feedback on your story... It is like no other.

    D:
     
    #337 cheesemuffin, Sep 15, 2011
  18. Great update!!! Clowns.... 
     
    #338 Eagleking, Sep 15, 2011
  19. Wrathbane is green?:0 omg
     
    #339 Empress_of_Shadows, Sep 15, 2011
  20. Eh still waiting for what happened to the troll army! Other than that great update
     
    #340 *IRONhulk (01), Sep 15, 2011
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