Revolution Feedback and chat

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Aug 11, 2011.

  1. Really nice update, I've been waiting for it  Your language is good as always and you get plus a million to awesomeness for putting in that clowns are scary 
    Keep up the good work 
     
  2. Here I go
    A bit creepy but great





























    That's it

    Keep it 


















    (that stands 4 up- that does)
     
  3. I can't right now, I have to clean and do 2 projects before I leave to go camping for 3 days >.<
     
  4. Btw, on "3rd party app" I made a group where you can discuss your own ideas for Revolution!

    Maybe even help write the sequel 

    It's "Revolution Ideas"
     
  5. Amazing chapter. But kinda freaky
     
  6. God damnit... My ******* arm and ribs...

    Anyways, new chapter for all you un-injured folks.
     
  7. o_o What happened?


    And that was a great chapter, glad you sent me hurling into a building. ;) But it was really great.
     
  8. This demonic trampoline here at camp literally almost broke my arm and beat the crap out of my ribs. Its a bubble... Surrounded by packed sand, with almost no borders except for a wooden fence...
     
  9. Wait, I exaggerated again, didn't I...

    Nah, my arm and shoulder are sprained like f*** and my ribs just hurt like f***. Still from that stupid trampoline, though
     
  10. Ouch.... o_O Well, hope you get well soon! Right chapters as slow as you want until you get better.. Then you better start belting 'em out. But really, get rest. o_o I don't want anything to smush this cheesemuffin.
     
  11. Cheese does that mean since im injured the chapter isnt for me?
     
  12. Love it, just I think it's supposed to be "someone she didn't know". Also I can't wait to find out who he is XD
     
  13. Hez teh n00b king
     
  14. NO I AM NOT THE NOOB KING
     
  15. I KNEW IT THAT HE WAS UR KARECTAR
     
  16. SO DID I AND CAPS THE FAST TRACK TO COOLNESS