I like it! From a technical aspect, one observation I have from reading first chapter. Leader of a seal team would not be a lieutenant first class. You essentially combined the rank of an officer with that of an enlisted man. Just call him lieutenant. And don't make him a lieutenant commander either, at that rank he would not be commanding a team on a mission.
Mayb he's just that good? Idk hey I know mostly only navy and army ranks do u know any airforce ranks not really familiar on those
I think it's FAN-FICTION-TASTIC!!!!!! approved!