The Writer's Café

Ok soo... I wrote a story long ago and I don't know if I should bump it, repost(with edits) or let it die. Opinions? It's on I think page 21 called The Kings General
 
I can't get my computer to open kaw, it says entering your kingdom for over 15 min, devs won't help, say I need a screen shot, but its only a loading screen. Help?
 
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ENDERS GAME IS COMING OUT AS A MOVIE!!!

I may never be so excited again in my life. It looks. Epic.
 
Eh. I can write poems fairly aptly. I don't know if they're happy or sad, I guess they're neutral?

We had an assignment in English a few months ago to write like 10-15 different kinds of poems or something and this guy sitting behind me wanted me to do a haiku for him. (FYI, he was high at the time.)

Poem I wrote for him:

______ (his name) is really, really high.
I think he might have to die.
Let us all say our goodbye.

Now that I look back, it wasn't very funny. You had to be there, I guess.
 
Also, y'all should read meh story. I need more critics.

Taking Flight, tell a friend. Start a blog. Heroes are over with. You people all have to learn. This world, is going to burn.
 
Smighty. That's old old news.
I read "The First Formic War" a few months ago.
See, I've always wanted to read Ender's Game, but I had to read the first one first, and I could never find it. While waiting for the second book in the Formic War series, I got off my lazy ass and decided to hold the book. I just started reading it... And the pages 80-110 or so are ******* RIPPED OUT! So, I'm going to read those pages online sometime, and finish the book.
Dammit, library.
 
Ender's Game is a story about a boy in the future who goes to a place called Battle School (at age 6) to learn to be a soldier. It's about the lessons he learns, friends he meets and things he does. There's like seven books in the whole series.
 
Allioss alli, oss alli allioss.
("After I finished reading Ender's Game, I was immediately ready to read it again. It's just phantasmal.")
 
I think Dune was better than Ender's Game, but there is no such thing as a good version of a "Dune" movie.

However I almost cried during Ender's Game. It is a fantastic read. And thanks to all who posted feedback. I didn't expect me complaining would get comments, I'll have to do it more. Lol.
 
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