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Pilots, MLP:FiM is My Little Pony.

You may say guys shouldn't be watching it ever, but it (was/is kinda) being directed by Lauren Faust, the same person who brought about such childhood shows as Powerpuff Girls, Foster's Home for Imaginary Friends, and such movies as the Iron Giant.

Oh, and her husband directed Samurai Jack and Dexter's Laboratory.
 
Powerpuff girls..?!!?
Love that show...or the characters at least...

(Lol spellcheck put Powderpuff don't know how that happened)
 
Ok can people tell me what they think about this blurb for a story I'm thinking of writing? It's kind of stupid but anyway.
It's called The Missing Chapter.
 
"Everyone has a story. Everyone but me. You see Sarah, my story's missing a chapter."

Emma White has just turned 18.
Or so she thinks.
Now an adult she can only remember three elements of her childhood, the pain, the tears, and the dark. Newly single, Emma has lots of plans for her life. But could all her plans, and ultimately, her life, be ruined by the sudden appearance of an all-too familiar face?
And could this man, who seems to know more about her then she does, stop her from finding her missing chapter?
 
Riding along the beach on her black stallion looking to get away from live and all of its ups and downs, DareMe looks out over the horizon at the morning sun bursting through the clouds. She is taken to a place far away from work and boyfriends and all other worries. All she feels is the bare back of her stallion between her legs and it feels good.
She rides further hoping to forget more. She is the only one on this glorious beach and this sunrise is all her own. She looks out over the water and is plesently surprised to see a group of dolphins playing in the water. She slows to catch this wondrous sight when she hears them singing. It's a strange sound. Odd for dolphins to play this close to shore singing. They appear to be flipping some sort of an object between themselves in the water. DareMe dismounts and decides to move closer. The dolphins don't seem to notice her approaching. It is a cell phone and it is lit up somehow. They are playing a game and taking turns. What game could these intellect creatures be so caught up in? Why it is Kingdoms at Way and they are singing KAW, KAW, KAW. DareMe is so inspired that she decides that she too must try this wonderful game.
 
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