The Writer's Café

Today, I had to correct another student's story about crime. He put a comma after EVERY question mark and exclamation point. An example:

- What do we have here?, he said.
- WHAT?!, Eric exclaimed.
- Be quiet!, she yelled.

The worst part is that he's 17.

I DON'T WANT TO LIVE ON THIS PLANET ANYMORE

Anyway... The point of this rant was to ask:
Are you a "grammar nazi"?
 
OkamiAmaterasu said:
Today, I had to correct another student's story about crime. He put a comma after EVERY question mark and exclamation point. An example:

- What do we have here?, he said.
- WHAT?!, Eric exclaimed.
- Be quiet!, she yelled.

The worst part is that he's 17.

I DON'T WANT TO LIVE ON THIS PLANET ANYMORE

Anyway... The point of this rant was to ask:
Are you a "grammar nazi"?
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Lolz he is 17 and writes that.... kind of sad.

No, i don't use correct grammar all the time, but when its hurts the piece because its so obvious like that, i will.
 
New start of book is up
Misinformation

A fire ball flew past my head as Azua rolled away.

Yes... Sadly this is what our school turned into... Bullies pushed the nerds to near extinction and the nerds bombed our school with toxic waist on there last stand. Over dramatic? Nope not in the year 3057. Society completely died after 2057 when the Astroid named ZZ-76 hit earth and plunged us into the darkness pasted the star named Pluto.

I was born in a world without sun... With out rules... Just the power of shadows... Every law of science has been broken.... An object in motion stays in motion unless acted opon by another force? No baseballs just falls if thrown, after 3feet of 'hang time' it just "Pops" and falls.

Either way without light after a while we ran out of power to supply light... With out light mutants with their powers of light where taken, murdered, and harvested... Trust me... I lost my family to that...

Even as I thought about this there was a burning sensation in my lower butt area... I plunged back into reality... I wished I was wrong... But I wasn't... My ass was on fire....
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EAT THIS, PERCY JACKSON FANS!!!!
 
I was actually #41 on the library holding list, but a friend let me borrow it.


Oh, it's better than "The Lost Hero".

It's awesome.

Oh, and Percy dies.






NOT!
 
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