The Writer's Café

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 20, 2010.

  1. Hmm...instead of cloe you could try...

    Merideth,
    Cassandra,
    Elle/Ella,
    Rachel...?
     
  2. Ella's pretty good i might go with that
     
  3. Okay, let me know if you need anymore help. =)
     
  4. :) okay I will do that!
     
  5. I'm going to take a guess here, but, u didn't like my poem did u?
     
  6. I was just thinking of this while I typed.

    The hunger and poverty brings me to tears.
    "What if I come next?" is what I mostly fear.
    The homeless the injured brings me down.
    How will I ever sleep without a sound now?
    We sit around and watch the poor and weak.
    But how can I help them is what I seek.
    So get out of bed and make a difference in where we live.
    What makes a difference is how we help, and what we give.

    So any feedback? Go easy on the comments btw I'm only in middle school.
     
  7. I just got an HSH account to see what the fuss is about... Their stories are AWFUL KaW has some really good writers. They all sound like 12 yr olds!
     
  8. Umm lol that's funny...yeah just 12 year old trying to be high schoolers (I have to admit that I'm twelve..)
     
  9. Sorry no offense to you matt  ur a great writer i wouldnt have guessed your twelve from it but you get what i mean well gnight peeps
     
  10. Mee not writer just editor...(but I know some people who are...)[i wish I was]{don't know any good ones yet they always end in desaster}...
     
  11. I swear you wrote a story  maybe not gnite
     
  12. Yes I do umm yeah I had a hsh account umm probubly the worst app I've downloaded...(no taken..)[ohh and night ohh and thanks for complimenting anyway ur storys are very good btw keep emm coming!!]
     
  13. Writing is my passion without a doubt.
    But some problems can come about.
    A terrible plot,
    Writers block,
    And disappointment around the clock.
    But this is what I love about being an author.
    The threats and worries are barely a bother.
    The challenges we face everyday,
    Can written away on a fresh, clean page.
     
  14. Nice!!!!(u writing a story??)
     
  15. Have u read my story acopolys
     
  16. Kinda but I think I'm having writers block
     
  17. I feel like writing something depressing just broke up with gf
     
  18. Sry 2 hear that
     
  19. I might be posting random poems here and there so try not to be annoyed. Thx! 