The Writer's Café

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 20, 2010.

  1. This is an old one, but it's one of my favorites, so I hope you like it.

    Just begun

    One day I wasn't looking, and I stumbled to my past
    I looked at all the memories that sadly couldn't last
    I looked at all the tears I shed, in the dark of night
    I herd of all the laughs I had, always seeming right
    Then I took another turn and watched it all unfold,
    The wonders of my future, the choices I'll soon hold,
    And when it comes to end, I'll know I had some fun
    By then might be wiser, and know the journeys just begun.

    -Irin
     
  2. G'night Gandalf
     
  3. I like it, did u make these off of urself or...?
     
  4. Thanks. I wrote them myself.
     
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  6. I noticed u gloomi
     
  7. That is so cool GlooMi
     
  8. My eyes r deciving me again
     
  9. Mine too, lol
     
  10. I feel pathetic I only got one comment
     
  11. Don't get discouraged. What's your story called? I'll read it then give you some feedback.
     
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  13. Ugh. That hurts mu eyes.

    But yeah, really cool!
     
  14. Did u know that is actully an optical illusion, gloomi?
     
  15. It looks like the text is coming at u and going away when it's not and it hurts cuz ur seeing something that isn't really there
     
  16. I thought so too
     
  17. I think I posted this one already, but it's my new favorite, and newest one, so I'll post it again.


    I'll Love You Forever

    Don't ever forget, what you said to me, 
    On the day we first kissed, by the trunk of our tree,
    You said that you'd love me, year after year,
    You said that you loved me, and that was my fear.

    Commitment had scared me, mistakes of my past.
    But you said our love was one that would last.
    And I loved you so deeply, I had to believe, 
    So I helped make our goal, one we could achieve.

    We married four years, right after that day.
    "I'll love you forever," is what you still say.
    And year after year, that promise you keep,
    From when we awake, to when we both sleep.

    But time had to pass, we were over the hill,
    "I'll love you for always," is what you say, still.
    You smiled your smile, and my eyes had shone,
    And for so many years, I was never alone.

    Then one rainy day, in a hospital bed,
    "You know I still love you," is what you had said.
    "I'll meet you in heaven, and thanks for the ride.
    I'll love you forever. I'll be at your side."