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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011.

  1. It depends, you said you know who killed him.

    Who said he was dead!
     
  2. Who attacked him.
     
  3. Ok back a bunch of pages go ordo said what have you done to my character. U said what u mean. He didnt answer. I know him irl so im gonna answer that for him.. He means that u said angel has been to scarred to use his powers. His version of angel didnt. At all. So he just means you put a sad twist on him..
     
  4. you r ordo...we all know it.
     
  5. I seriously feel like crying.
     
  6. I deleted a whole two days worth of writing today on accident that I hadn't posted yet... For this story of course.
     
  7. Yikes! Did you back up anything? Or was it on your iPod?
     
  8. It was untitled in this document app by savysoda

    I started another untitled and when i saved it, i went back to the files and only one untitled was there!
    it wasnt the story, but some colors I need to write down ;(
     
  9. Yeah, the app basically said eff you.
     
  10. That sux feather.. And me and bob are phisically the same person. But i have a... Split personality. So you have to get to know me twice.. Everythings different..
     
  11. Nice chapter!
     
  12. Thanks ;)

    I wish I had more readers.

    Like colonial and zaln and mystique.
     
  13. Maybe they're busy?
     
  14. Yess! Kill him! Then u can actually use my character, rather than an extra in a smidge of my characters past..