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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011.

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  1. ...not necessarily sex...romance=good story
     
    #421 FeatherHunter, Jun 3, 2011
  2. True a good balance of
    Romance
    Comedy
    Tragedy
    Action
    Horror
    Mystery
    And....erotica
     
    #422 Eagleking, Jun 3, 2011
  3. Ah... I wanna fight monsters. >:O BLOODTHRISTTT
     
    #423 Smighter89, Jun 3, 2011
  4. Rah. I'm going to somewhere near me for a day so if there's no comments, you know why.
     
    #424 Smighter89, Jun 3, 2011
  5. i remodeled the first 2 chapters of the story from the tips and feedback zaln gave me
     
    #425 FeatherHunter, Jun 3, 2011
  6. Cool
     
    #426 Eagleking, Jun 3, 2011
  7. yeah...
     
    #427 FeatherHunter, Jun 3, 2011
  8. Yep....
     
    #428 Eagleking, Jun 3, 2011
  9. Nice chapter, I like how u put in a part that sums up where everyone is so far and what they're doing.
     
    #429 Storallelite, Jun 3, 2011
  10. Thanks Stora...

    Even I wasn't expecting that to happen until you reminded me of it.

    I can point out the main characters right now:

    Hope
    Despair
    Jerad
    Lynet
    Sharlyse
    Matt

    Supporting:
    Cygnus
    Star
    Crinus
    Arria
    Alexandria
    Prince Rowan
    Princess Jatoria


    Minor:
    Angel
    Thorlas
    Morgur Artidra
     
    #430 FeatherHunter, Jun 3, 2011
  11. I like despair
     
    #431 Eagleking, Jun 3, 2011
  12. DOESNT EVERYONE?

    LOL

    :cool:
     
    #432 FeatherHunter, Jun 3, 2011
  13. Lol
     
    #433 Eagleking, Jun 3, 2011
  14. :cool: I think I like James the best, he's insane!
     
    #434 FeatherHunter, Jun 3, 2011
  15. Yeah lol
     
    #435 Eagleking, Jun 3, 2011
  16. :)
     
    #436 FeatherHunter, Jun 3, 2011
  17. YAAA JAMESSS! What about me? I'm a mega minor character. Lol
     
    #437 Smighter89, Jun 5, 2011
  18. Also.. I have a short story almost finished for Smighter.
     
    #438 Smighter89, Jun 5, 2011
  19. Cool
     
    #439 Eagleking, Jun 5, 2011
  20. Smighter isn't a character really, just a plot twister
     
    #440 FeatherHunter, Jun 5, 2011
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