The Editor's Blog

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FeatherHunter, Jan 12, 2011.

  1. i did write some fanfics but i'm no good at writing is what others say but really i am i just don't want to show it.
     
  2. Lol yeah u just don't want to show it
     
  3. i never did really unless i'm around classmates
     
  4. I'm a great writer but I get stuck on what to write about ...
     
  5. Look for Anything, whateve you feel like, any idea or look at other story's and copy their idea, but change the whole of the story, get creative!

    It's your book, no one knows if you make a mistake (other than spelling, grammar etc) because they don't know what your thinking, don't worry :)
     
  6. i have been doing tgat but peple keep stopping me :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil:
     
  7. Don't give in to people so easily, just keep writing...
     
  8. Can ppl read my story? Earth's Heroes
     
  9. my friend made a club called Earth Heroes when we were 9 o_O
     
  10. Here's my next chapter! Please read and tell me what's wrong(if anything is)


    Isaac and Cyguns Meeting
    Isaac rushed though the abanonded city, searching for living people, Isaac's beatiful bionic arm had gone to waste crushing the face of a mutant off, and slamming it againist a wall. Issac always felt sad when he had to use his ultimate bionic arm to injure others but if a freak with claws jumps from a building and ambushes you, what else can you do? Issac was being to think this was some kind of sick, twisted test for sciencist and they've knocked him unconicess and rigged him up to a mind machine, because on a normal saturday morning a giant storm and and deadly meteor shower don't often happen, and your parents and brother don't normally turn into mutants. As Isaac was hastly turning a rough bend he heard something, the sound of a bionic arm moving, so close to him. But stopped, because no-one in Isaac's area has bionic arm, and bionic arms aren't that common, even in 2012. Issac thought this was a good place to stop, catch his breath, think and trace his steps back. Isaac had been running for about two hours and was searching for food drink and shelter, Isaac had had stashed some food and drink so that wasn't that bad, but he had no place to camp out and sleep, and in a city full of mutants that would think twice about ripping you up and eating you shelter was vital. But Isaac's train of thought when a voice could be heard and it said
    "SCANNING AREA FOR LIFE FORMS," Isaac almost straight away ran. But this was a army robot, it could scan a five hundread square metre area in ten seconds, and this was the right robot for scanning a mutant hazard zone. It sensed Isaac and hunted him down like a blood hound, it chased his tail for about ten seconds before it was about ten metres from Isaac. It was like the terminator in the movie The Terminator, a big human build but still clearly a robot, beacuse on its right arm was a chain gun and its left eyes was a close up scanner, half it's face was torn off and a metal framing of bones showed.
    "WHAT IS YOUR NAME HUMAN?" It said speaking in a slow but loud voice.
    "What is your's robot?"
    "I ASKED FIRST! ANSWER MY QUESTION OR I WILL HAVE TO REDUCED YOUR BODY TO DUST!" The robot said pushing it's chain gun arm forwards to show that it would blast him into a thousand pieces.
    "My name is Isaac! Now you answer my question!"
    "MY NAME IS CYGUNS THE DESTROYER,"
    Isaac had the most stupid thought and sometime must had taken over his vocal chords, because the next thing he said was,
    "You are a threat to me! I MUST elimnate you"

    It took Isaac ten seconds to be pinned, because Issac had thought that Cyguns would be a slow predicible robot, but he was far from that. Isaac had drawn his handgun first and shot Cyguns at the shoulder, but the bullet bounced off like it was made of rubber, Cyguns slowly walked towards Isaac and simply picked him up by the neck and thrown him to the ground.
    "NOW DO YOU SEE WHY THEY CALL ME THE DESTROYER? YOU HAVE ONE CHANCE TO TEAM UP WITH ME TO ELIMINATE THE MUTANTS!" And Isaac had no other thing to do but team up with Cyguns
     
  11. U totally ripped of Cygnus MY fanfic character
     
  12. [quote="regran] Lol[/quote]


    DEAD SERIOUS
     
  13. DEAD SERIOUS
     
  14. DEAD SERIOUS
     
  15. BAD KITN
     
  16. I didn't, I did u sign up and got that character!