Innocence  Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 8, 2010.

  1. Sorry. Ive had a few parties these last couple nights, which is normally when I write and update. I'll see if I can do something.
     
  2. Awsome new update
     
  3. I had Bo idea irin was a girl in the first part
     
  4. Really? Crap. I'll fix that some how. Maybe in the final draft I'll add an introduction or something.
     
  5. Please bump innocence! I love it
     
  6. INOCENSE IS AWSOME[color/] [size/]
     
  7. INOCENSE IS AWSOME
     
  8. Ok know I got it
     
  9. This is an epic story. Get it published. No joke:)
     
  10. Thanks so much, guys!

    I'll see if I can get a new post up today.
     
  11. MWAHAHAHAHA! Bet y'all didn't see that coming!

    Which is good...cause I didn't either. I just made that up...wait...no I didn't. Cause all of this actually happened...yeah...we'll go with that....

    Anyway...is it just me, or does anyone else think Irin could totally use a hug right now.
     
  12. *gives Irin a hug* Loce the story u got me hooked!
     
  13. Haha thanks! I'm glad you like it!
     
  14. I must say I didn't think the story would go apocalypse on us. Excelent post.
    Seth
     
  15. awsome post definatly didn't see it coming great job irin
     
  16. Whoa, Irin has a bro... That's the good thing about forgetting you left your iTouch in your jeans... Or in my case your gf's jeans, you look for it, but can't find it for a while and take a break. When you find it, you're relieved to find it (No details for how mine was lost ), and the authors continue to write so you have lots to read when you're back. But then, you find that character disappears in the middle of a battle. Lmao, great page or so of Innocent Innocence goodness. Sweet job hon! I'm still an avid reader since it first came out. I remember when you first started this, I didn't know you at all. I just noticed your thread in the Off Topic section. When I read it, I liked it, so I went to post on the feedback. I found that you were talking to yourself, I believe. Good memories Sis! And great story!

    iZaln
     
  17. Thanks guys!

    ZALN!! Haven't seen you in awhile. I was worried you stopper reading.
    But don't worry. I have big things planned for iZ. Major-ish plot twist. Wait...just had a spark of brilliance! Even more major now. I can't wait to write this.
     
  18. when's the next chap comin out? cuz Im really excited to c what happens next
     
  19. Irin


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