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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 8, 2010.

  1. Congrats Irin!
    I got confirmed in May
     
  2. Thanks Stora! Congrats to you too!

    New post. I know it's been awhile.. Been a bit busey.
     
  3. Oooh, super love tense! Lmao, good chapter. Seems very... Realistic. This happen to you? Anyway... Who made the character Renethon...? Was it a sign up or you made it? Lol iAsk too many questions.

    iZaln
     
  4. Thanks, Lol. Renethon was my own character I made him up about two years ago. No, this didn't happen to me...not exactly.
     
  5. I want soooo badly to read your story irin! But... It's so.... Long. ;(
     
  6. Lol, I'm sorry it's so long Marian. I didn't mean for that to happpen. It's almos over, then I have one or two more books planned after.
     
  7. @Marian
    That's what she said. Lmao, sorry I can't help it.

    @Irin
    Not exactly hmm? Now this is a tale asking to be told indeed!

    iZaln
     
  8. Well...it's complicated. He didn't even ask me out. Were just friends.
     
  9. But you guys kissed and did the deed. How typical .

    iZ
     
  10. Who? Irin and Renethon? Thier relationship is sketchy right now, if it can even be called that. And I think thier friendship might be on the line.
     
  11. No, you and your little thing you're hiding.

    iZ
     
  12. We never kissed. There was a rumor that he was going to ask me out, but it was just a rumor I guess. It's been over a month and he hasn't said anything. We barely see each other anyway.
     
  13. Lolz, wow, coincidence cuz I broke up with my gf a few months back and I planned to ask a certain girl out, but I wimped out lmfao. Maybe later this year.

    iZaln
     
  14. Aww, sorry about your gf.

    But you should ask her out. She might like you too!
     
  15. Idk, maybe I will. Only time will tell I guess.

    iZaln
     
  16. Yeah, same here I guess..
     
  17. New post.

    Alright, I have to know. What are all of you guys thinking?
     
  18. Well I may not have feedback for u irin but I do have a little story for you. Well this starts like any other school day but well here is my point I have felt like u and still do irin it's the way of life sometimes you just have to let go
     
  19. Nice chapter hungry person. Eating like a hobo  lmao.

    iZaln
     
  20. That chapter made me hungry...
    Seth