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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 8, 2010.

  1. Alright, so there's a new Part up right now. And then were gonna have this whole fight scene witch should be pretty cool, and then I'll get into some really good plot stuff. So stayed tuned, I know this part might be disapointing, cause it's kinda boreing and such, soo...ya. It'll get better.

    I promise.
     
  2. Good job. A quick question, what ever happened to Seth?
    Seth
     
  3. Oh...um...aparently he stayed behind in Erram. Arrabella told me she wanted to keep an eye on him, Seth being human and all.
     
  4. Okay...now my thumb hurts, not only because I typed a decent amount of innocence, but because it's cold, and my fingers are numb. So I hope you all take the time to read the ******* chapter, cause now my thumb hurts.
    That is all.

    This has been a message from Irin, who is in a bad mood because her thumb hurts.
     
  5. Awsome story I think "protector" dude is the rings person form and I think I know who iz is anyway AWSOME BOOK KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK IRIN
     
  6. Thanks webs! Your support means a lot! Wall me who you think iZ is. If you want I'll tell you if your right.
     
  7. To anyone who has signed up and not appeared/ not appeared very much, I'm very sorry. I'm still figureing out some plot details, and you may or may not come in. If you haven't yet, you might come in the second, or possibly third book if I write a third. Thanks for your cooperation, and sorry for any confusion.

    -Irin
     
  8. 
    Seth
     
  9. MWAHAHA! An evil cliff hanger! 
     
  10. Okay, I need guesses. I really want to know what you guys are thinking. So I won't post the next chapter untill I get at least two theories. (did I spell that right?)
    anyway, please post your guesses! I REALLY want to post this next chapter. I'm so excited!
     
  11. Exiting new instalment who is him????
     
  12. The protector dude or maybe ...???
     
  13. I think it's the protector aswell.
    Excelent post.
    Only thing is that you spelt focused wrong most of the time.
    Seth
     
  14. Yeah I noticed that after I posted...not the greatest speller in the world...

    Anyway, good guesses, but still incorrect. As you recall, The Protector was just something of an annoyence to Irin. Here it's almost as if she fears this mysterious him.
     
  15. Still doesn't say who although my guess now Is ....... I DONT KNOW
     
  16. Lol no my real guess is irins brother 1:becose it says they have the same eyes 2:some1 from her past who she knows very well and has had a huge fire with led me to believ this